All Comments on 'Lost and Found'

This would make a good love story if redone. Our hero is a man of integrity who cooks-which is rarefy in these stories. This story is more than just sex and I agree with those who say it's not developed-it has great potential to be more than a sex story . How does he find out her talents? show us her potential as a business woman..

I was disappointed with the ending. It could have been much stronger and forceful. Fast forward to her opening her own store, for instance..

The new watercress at Abby's -shows the guy as just another cheap prick. The author should save that for another story..

The characters are inadequately developed, to put it mildly.

Much of the text makes no sense - completely unrealistic