All Comments on 'Lottie and Tom Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Really nice beginning

I like it. Nice and likable characters. No 10'' dicks or super large tits. I also like the rules they set themselves. I just hope they comply to them.

Looking forward to the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
more soon?

Likeable characters and great conflict. Real and relatable. Well done.

mcollectmcollectover 9 years ago
Great start

Can't wait for the next chapter. Sounds realistic unlike so many on this site. I agree with the previous post about the sizes of their equipment sounding like normal people.

CubDriver95CubDriver95over 9 years ago
Great start.

I knew this girl growing up only she was blond and named Cathy. When she gave me my shot I couldn't get over her being in the sister category. So I can believe Tom's confusion and hesitation. The only problem I have is that you never shave a red pussy completely, they're as rare as pearls, who does that? Keep it coming.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Good job

I live the characters and how they fell in love, I hop they gloe the rules they set for themselves. More love and less sex would be a great change of events on this site and would make the story better. For me it is all about the story and not about the sex

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great love story.

Can't wait for more. To bad they all aren't like that in real life.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Loved it

Just one thing. Will a kid that young ask sth like can I call you Tom instead of Thomas. That was weird. The rest was smooth.

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