All Comments on 'Louise's Treat'

Is this your true life story? Or a fun masturbation fantasy? You enjoyed daddy's cock or just a quick glimpse that fired your imagination? I'd love to see a photo of you in your profile, something I could stroke my cock to and cum like your daddy does.

Your grammar sucks.

Good story, I love the way the two girls took to each other. Obviously Daddy has to get his rocks off, but all round everyone was satisfied, even me 😊

CassieK. Thank you so much for your supportive comments.

On the grammar remark, thank you for the criticism. Although you do put the full stop in a slightly odd position.

To the other comment, the threesome idea is Daddy's request which I've only been able to write about. I hope this answers the question.

I agree with CassieK. Who gives a flying fuck about the grammar. This is Literotica, not literature class . I'm 60, a school drop out, and I don't have a problem following the story . I think because some people are not capable of doing this good of work, they hide behind anonymous to bash those that are. Keep up the good work.