All Comments on 'Love By Chance Ch. 01'

this was a very intriguing start.....can't wait to read the rest....hopefully the next chapter will be longer...

I love hurt/comfort romances; especially ones where the rescuer falls for the victim and vice versa.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

I can tell that this is going to be a great series. Just make them longer.

Please write more!!!!

Great start! Can't wait till the next chapter. But please make it longer!!

You should definitely continue this was a great start

I cant wait to read more.

Please continue, you can't leave it now

Great beginning...please make the next chapters longer!!!

I loved it!!! please continue!! Have to see what happens!!!

Thanks for the comments! I will try to make the next chapters longer. I'm still working on the next chapter, which should be finished soon...

I feel like I'm missing something, you know that key piece of evidence that ties it all together...

Is there a back story between Max and Kayden?

That's how this story reads. No true character development, no reason why Kayden has been targeted or why a division of the FBI would be interested in such a low-profile case. Another thing- if someone in LE thinks a person is being harmed, they don't need a warrant to investigate. Just the fact that Kayden was screaming for help gives Max all the justification he needs to break in and save him.

confusing.? not worth the effort .? and since you have not updated it, well i think that says it all.?

PLEASE I AM BEGGING YOU WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS

Please write more . . .

All the shortcomings listed by others could be remedied if you got on with the story. Be careful with the words 'to' and 'too'. They are quite different. But your plot is very promising.

More please.. I like....