All Comments on 'Love in Chains Ch. 18'

by Nephylim

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lonesomedove66lonesomedove66almost 11 years ago
From the nightmare comes nirvana

A perfect ending. It was a hard and intense story but a brilliant ending with a positive outcome. Well done :):)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Other than the incorrect use of "abstract" this was a very good chapter. Nye wouldn't have used abstract words, they would have been simple.

Poor Nye will have major PTSD and he and Kane will have a long road. Not only will Nye need to deal with his own abuse, and Lucas' death, but also cannot brush under the rug that he had hurt Kane as well, even though he didn't know it was him at the time.

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