All Comments on 'Love in the Neighborhood Pt. 01'

Women, please respond to the story. The second one is on its way. I want to hear from you.

Well if I am being honest this was horrible. It was boring and not even a tiny bit sexy or a turn on. I'm assuming english isn't your first language. There were a lot of grammatical errors in this story.

I'm sorry, and I don't mean to offend you as English is clearly not your native language, but this is without doubt the worst writing of any kind I have ever come across. I have read thousands of erotic stories over the years and I'm shocked the moderators would even consider posting this on Literotica. Did anyone actually read it before doing so?