by StangStar06
Most enjoyable and entertaining. I only wonder where oh where did StangStar06 go. He and his Mustang seem to have just driven off into the sunset.
Well written, a good plot and most entertaining. Loved the humour.Five stars, naturally.
A nice happy ending for the lovely couple and absolutely nothing for the evil slut ex-wife, just as it should be.
One of your best Stangstar!
What has happened to all the good writers like StangStar006? There is something making them leave this site?? Does anyone know where they went??
Well this one hit hit all marks. Refreshing, fun & the ending was perfect.
Definitely worth a reread.
Just good fun. Great pace, nice dialogue, and just enough uncertainty; exellent job.
I didn't because i was sure my wife was going to deliver on the highway. "Time the contractions, time the contractions " that's all i ever heard. No one ever fucking told me that people can have erratic contractions. Sometimes she had one other times she had two in a row. I was driving on Storrow in winter with snow falling on a Friday night in rush hour unable to time my wife. There was an ambulance next to me at one point without lights. I almost got out and knocked on the damned windows.
Well long story short my baby did arrive several hours later... all 10 pounds 6 ounces. No c section. When she was delivered she just kept coming she was so long. My wife became a superhero that night. I also understood my parents finally and realized what real love was all about.
A little bit of a chick story, but great anyway. After all, there were three Muskrats in it. The Bear gives StangStar06 7 stars ( can't count, remember ?? ) A very nice story where the good guys ( and girls ) win. The Bear approves.
The BEAR
Mony Mony here she came and. stayed, stayed. TK U MLJ LV NV
Just about the right length, packed with detail to keep the story rolling along slickly.
5 stars.
Really enjoyed this story. Usually stories from the female POV is about why she cheated. This story was fresh. Iโm reading all your stories from top to bottom and Iโm putting this story in the top 3. Enjoying your writing.
Beautiful and wonderful story. Definitely a five star rating. ๐๐๐๐๐
Wonderful story, should have kicked the ex in the ass on the way out door at that last meeting. You know where we lots our control? Don't you guys? We screwed up by giving the them tennis shoes and birth control pills!!!!! Kudps to the author and his editors!
I love this, but it started so dark though. It was a bit difficult to read about the non consent issues and part of me wanted those miscreants to get there due comeuppance. But I got swept away with the budding romance between Mona and Brandon that that part of her life faded to the background.
Definitely should have been in the romance category.
Lovely reimagining of Fanny by Gaslite, only set in the modern day
I miss you my friend. I hope you and your lovely wife are well. I have no idea if you will get this as I know you post elsewhere. I watched that video again from last year about that that Detroit cop with the "black ghost" I know you enjoyed it.
Anyway, I hope you are okay. My husband and I enjoy your stories a ton. I would love to kick your ass however because my husband is into cars again. I seriously thought my body drove that out of his mind. He really was stupefied for some time.
I guess I have more work to do. At least it's fun.
P.S. I don't know if you read at all. Still, even if you don't, could you please let me and your other huge fans know they life well or are lesst manageability?
If you can't then that's OK too. I miss you. You were one of my favorites and you are a decent guy. Be well. Hugs
Another read of this one and still just as good. Nice to have one of these stories from the womans viewpoint, especially the woman who is for real and not ball buster.
Damn Son, you got me again. Loved it. You write delightful character. I was emotionally involved from the get go. RESPECT!
A fun exciting read loved n enjoyed it immensley. Thanks for all ur hard work.
The playing with Mona at the end was worth getting knocked the fuck out for. For a girl like her pretending your throwing her to the curb is just fucked up. And Brandon this bitch was pathetic from start to finish
A wonderful, smile producing story. I loved the character development. The ending was just right. Thanks. An easy 5-๐๐๐๐๐
I read the whole story trying to recon. the beginning with an ending. This beginning and ending was a total gem. The story telling was off the charts including the M/Cโs. Totally awesome. TFS.
I'm just cheering for them! A wonderful story indeed. I'm sad for her that she didn't start out with a sense of how valuable she is, and let all the takers fuck her. Heart-breaking imagining that for someone I care about. Well done, SS, if you are still monitoring.
I must remember that phrase : โprowling like some big titted lionโ. William Shakespeare Ainโt got nothing on thisโฆ
You Have Made My Day AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks.
This was SO epic... i would have given you 10stars... fuck it... i pressed the 5stars button twice! (Yes, i am a rebel๐)