by StangStar06
This was SO epic... i would have given you 10stars... fuck it... i pressed the 5stars button twice! (Yes, i am a rebel๐)
You Have Made My Day AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks.
I must remember that phrase : โprowling like some big titted lionโ. William Shakespeare Ainโt got nothing on thisโฆ
I'm just cheering for them! A wonderful story indeed. I'm sad for her that she didn't start out with a sense of how valuable she is, and let all the takers fuck her. Heart-breaking imagining that for someone I care about. Well done, SS, if you are still monitoring.
I read the whole story trying to recon. the beginning with an ending. This beginning and ending was a total gem. The story telling was off the charts including the M/Cโs. Totally awesome. TFS.
A wonderful, smile producing story. I loved the character development. The ending was just right. Thanks. An easy 5-๐๐๐๐๐
The playing with Mona at the end was worth getting knocked the fuck out for. For a girl like her pretending your throwing her to the curb is just fucked up. And Brandon this bitch was pathetic from start to finish
A fun exciting read loved n enjoyed it immensley. Thanks for all ur hard work.
Damn Son, you got me again. Loved it. You write delightful character. I was emotionally involved from the get go. RESPECT!
Another read of this one and still just as good. Nice to have one of these stories from the womans viewpoint, especially the woman who is for real and not ball buster.
I miss you my friend. I hope you and your lovely wife are well. I have no idea if you will get this as I know you post elsewhere. I watched that video again from last year about that that Detroit cop with the "black ghost" I know you enjoyed it.
Anyway, I hope you are okay. My husband and I enjoy your stories a ton. I would love to kick your ass however because my husband is into cars again. I seriously thought my body drove that out of his mind. He really was stupefied for some time.
I guess I have more work to do. At least it's fun.
P.S. I don't know if you read at all. Still, even if you don't, could you please let me and your other huge fans know they life well or are lesst manageability?
If you can't then that's OK too. I miss you. You were one of my favorites and you are a decent guy. Be well. Hugs
Definitely should have been in the romance category.
Lovely reimagining of Fanny by Gaslite, only set in the modern day
I love this, but it started so dark though. It was a bit difficult to read about the non consent issues and part of me wanted those miscreants to get there due comeuppance. But I got swept away with the budding romance between Mona and Brandon that that part of her life faded to the background.
Wonderful story, should have kicked the ex in the ass on the way out door at that last meeting. You know where we lots our control? Don't you guys? We screwed up by giving the them tennis shoes and birth control pills!!!!! Kudps to the author and his editors!
Beautiful and wonderful story. Definitely a five star rating. ๐๐๐๐๐
Really enjoyed this story. Usually stories from the female POV is about why she cheated. This story was fresh. Iโm reading all your stories from top to bottom and Iโm putting this story in the top 3. Enjoying your writing.
Just about the right length, packed with detail to keep the story rolling along slickly.
5 stars.
Mony Mony here she came and. stayed, stayed. TK U MLJ LV NV
A little bit of a chick story, but great anyway. After all, there were three Muskrats in it. The Bear gives StangStar06 7 stars ( can't count, remember ?? ) A very nice story where the good guys ( and girls ) win. The Bear approves.
The BEAR
I didn't because i was sure my wife was going to deliver on the highway. "Time the contractions, time the contractions " that's all i ever heard. No one ever fucking told me that people can have erratic contractions. Sometimes she had one other times she had two in a row. I was driving on Storrow in winter with snow falling on a Friday night in rush hour unable to time my wife. There was an ambulance next to me at one point without lights. I almost got out and knocked on the damned windows.
Well long story short my baby did arrive several hours later... all 10 pounds 6 ounces. No c section. When she was delivered she just kept coming she was so long. My wife became a superhero that night. I also understood my parents finally and realized what real love was all about.
Just good fun. Great pace, nice dialogue, and just enough uncertainty; exellent job.
Well this one hit hit all marks. Refreshing, fun & the ending was perfect.
Definitely worth a reread.
What has happened to all the good writers like StangStar006? There is something making them leave this site?? Does anyone know where they went??
A nice happy ending for the lovely couple and absolutely nothing for the evil slut ex-wife, just as it should be.
One of your best Stangstar!
Well written, a good plot and most entertaining. Loved the humour.Five stars, naturally.
Most enjoyable and entertaining. I only wonder where oh where did StangStar06 go. He and his Mustang seem to have just driven off into the sunset.
It could be SS06 to some degree writes redundant stories, but for some odd reason people just keep on reading them story after story. ๐ค
In the long, long string of writing the same story, over and over again.
Wish there were more than five stars. Great story!
This is so good. It's a re reader. Thank you for a fun story.
After twenty years of marriage and as callously as she waited for him to get home to catch him flat footed and rub his nose in it before she walked out on him??? She was definitely no newbee to cheating on him. It was just that she thought 'this is the ONE' and wanted her husband to see that she was "movin' on up". She, like her whore at heart mother, had no conscience about cheating on her husband or about going out of her way to hurt a man that she absolutely knew loved her to the bone. If anything, she deserved to be hit and thrown sixty feet into the air by a speeding Mustang GT.
Miriam didn't learn shit. If she had as many cocks sticking out of her as she's had stuck into her, she'd look like a Porcupine so she was just taking a shot at a KNOWN SUCKER to get another FREE RIDE until the next hot, exiting cock come over her horizon.
To Stangstar06: As for that final 'rub it in' meeting... wtf??? that was a total waste of time and typing. You didn't rip her ass open or her mother's either.... and the father must have been a first class jerk off to be defending any 'rights' for the cheating cunt that he positively knew his daughter was. Why didn't Brandon ask him how many times he'd taken his cunt back after she'd run off and fucked other men during their marriage? Then the meeting might have had some punch. As it was, that whole scene was.... weak... and pointless.
Otherwise, though far your best... a pretty good story.
Sometimes you win when you think you've lost. In this story two lovely people who thought that they had lost everything found that, instead of having lost everything, in reality they had found the most important thing you can ever find, love. Not a sometimes love, but a forever love, with the one person in the world that they were meant to spend forever with.
there is a difference between getting out of and getting something out of
a marriage.
Entertaining Stang Saga...almost makes me wish I still had my '94 yellow GT...guess I'll stick with the 410hp MKS ecoboost.
Cute and somewhat sad
story First her. Father now a very favorite teacher.
I really like the neighbor lady and that they became friends
What gives someone the right to leave with another person saying I have some issues to work out and think they can come back like everything is OK She left a man that loved her and was used and. Realized she had made a mistake. Bull shit burn in hell bitch or go live with your parents
Ron. cowboyridecc@yahoo
The stupidity of Miriam and her parents (ESPECIALLY her mother) just seems unforgivable for someone who managed to live past infancy - how someone that stupid didn't drown themSELVES in a bathtub is beyond me.
The divorce was final two months ago, abandonment as a case for divorce is 12 months for a total of fourteen months..
Miriam, what, just the day BEFORE escaped and spent every single moment coming back...? See, she must have... because anyone else with even a couple of brain cells would have used a phone to contact her family to SLIGHTLY speed up the rate of their return.
And her mother, regardless of WHAT happened to Miriam should have been smart enough to realize that nothing AFTER her daughter LEAVING had any import to it - she left him, end of story - unless she had fewer brain cells than a dumb rock.
Her father wants to waste money on a lawyer to try to get something from Brandon two months after a legal document has been filled...?
Be careful not to buy a car from him... if you make any changes in it he might insist you return it to him. Idiot.
Every time I read one of your stories, I say it again, that it is a great story. I know my comments get repetitious, BUT you did it again. Another absolutely fabulous story. I could almost feel the love between these two characters, and it felt good.
One question though, I might have missed it but what did the first paragraph have to do with the rest of the story?
Thanks again for another wonderful love story.
loved it, normally I would have preferred reconciliation, but not in this case, due to her blatant in your face, total abuse of hubby. I don't know how the age difference will, but I hope it does. maybe she can go visit her aunt after the child is born.
This is fantastic. I fucking love it. The start. The middle. The end.
Well done!
A GREAT STORY I HAVE READ IT BEFORE AND WILL READ IT AGAIN. MIRIAM IS A REAL BITCH I MUST SAY.I REALLY LIKE IT. 5 STARS PLUS
RON
Suckers. I guess all the best people in the world are suckers. The assholes who fuck up their love are worthless. Great tale.
I wouldn't have let Miri and her parents on the property. He hurt Mona the way he screwed with his ex wife but I enjoyed her getting her comeuppance. She and her parents had no shame in their expectations, ha. The dude Robert whose Searching Lit name is one messed up mofo. I am a vet and don't agree with the protracted war. But you are a twisted DICK! You are the type of asshole that I would like to rip the head off and shit down your neck. Fuck you!
the suckers are also the best lovers for each other, TK U MLJ LV NV
Did anyone else think that Brandon's sympathy for Miranda was misplaced?
Parents always try to take credit for offspring that turn out well. But they are never expected to take responsibility for offspring that turn out to be cunts.
Perhaps Miriam would have ended up being a better human being, if Miranda had not been blowing smoke up her bum when she was growing up.
I once went to a "progressive" conference with Families of Iraqi Vets. The parents weren't apologizing for raising children to be were savage, ruthless, thugs. This was after we learned that the Bush administration had lied to us about the motivation for the invasion of Iraq. So we knew at that point, that their offspring had volunteered to invade and murder people whose only crime was defending their homes and family. There was not a draft. Their children were volunteers. They expected the audience to feel sorry for them and their children who died while trying to murder Iraqis in their own homes.
I remember thinking.., I would probably still love my son or daughter, but I would feel guilty that he or she turned out to be a blood thirsty, thug. I would expect people to blame me for being a horrible parent. And I certainly wouldn't expect anyone else to feel empathy for my suffering for the loss of my son or daughter, instead of empathy for the innocent victims of my son or daughter.
Robert
This is one of my all time favourite stories. Just a great feel good tale.
The author knows love and commitment (I THINK) from personal experience!! Marriage and fidelity and TRUST are extremely important to the author!! The author has my vote as one of, if not the best purveyer of what two people go thru to make a relationship work - or not! Your stories are all fascinating!!
You did a much better job of crafting the characters and letting them behave as that character should. Great ending. I kept wondering how you were going to tie in the opening.
WOW! What an awesome story! Great plot, characters, and sex. (I really loved the 6 holes Brandon played with Mona). If there are "50 ways to leave your lover," an extra one should be added for Miriam--"get out the door whore." Couldn't give it a 10, so I gave it a 5.
Finally, a story that demonstrated all the characteristics of a well crafted piece. Believable characters, interesting plot, natural dialogue, good description of setting and an ending that makes the reading worthwhile. Just really well writen. Thanks again.
Loved it from beginning to end. 5+. Characters were all believable, plot held together nicely, and a wonderful ending.
I loved this story and the characters were classic. The author is extremely good in all aspects of presenting this story. The drama and development of this story was emotional and well described flawlessly. Brandon got his pound of flesh in the end which was better than expected. Miriam got her due as the cheating cunt/skank she was. The story was totally entertaining and probably one. I will comeback to read again and again. Thank you for a wonderful 5 stars story.
read straight through. and I really liked how to tied to the opening. :)
@ AdjectiveNounVerb The Romantic Revenge Story (RRS) is not Romance, because only the wives get the TTB dose by Romantic Way...............
BTW Not only FM writes story, where the betrayed husband gets his Second Chance woman before his divorce............
That was a hell of a story. Well-written, a narrator with a distinct voice, good narrative flow, happy ending... and could very easily have been in the Romance category too.
that i downloaded it to read because i love the way it is written and the characters. i alreay gave u a 5 on it.
I just went back and read this one, because I missed the posting as was out of town. Loved it as written from the female point of view and agree with some others that it might be one of your finer stories. Five stars.
The beginning was so depressing I kept putting it down. I saw the rating and knew it had to be redeeming itself but the first page was very difficult to get through. What should have been 5 stars was knocked down to four because of the beginning. Otherwise, another great story!
Thanks for all your stories but I have a question. Now that you are referring to yourself in the plural, is it because of Mikothebaby or someone else, Shakespeare?
But let me tell you this is your best story so far. Keep them coming.
He thought it said 'love is for cock suckers' and figured it was his biography.
I really loved the part when the hero told his ex wife to get her boney ass stepping.
I make some more pithy comments when I feel like it and simply express gratitude or appreciation when I feel like -
You know sorta like it is my choice to do as I damn well please -
SS06 has been doing this, and fairly well IMHO, for a while now - he has rounded out his plots better, gotten people to edit his work, he uses a consistent plot device well in each story - whether you like Mustangs or not. His overall style has settled in to something relatively recognizable while occasionally throwing us a serious curve.
I happen to like his general approach to the central story lines - and how he treats good and bad people in his world. All in all nice and would be worth paying for and we get it for free.
Me happy person me like this muchly heh
Would be interested to here Miriam's motivation for leaving, I'm sure it wasn't on a whim & was probably more than boredom.
you that most of these moron commenters don't have the aptitude to critique well written stories? Surprisingly, some of them have enough self awareness to realize it.
Even more surprisingly, a few still manage to bleat out a feeble critique that lacks substance but makes up for it in comic relief. Sorry you have an axe to grind against this author but anyone with a smidgen of perception can see this is a pretty good story for free sex story site.
@SleeplessinMD3 You are wrong, becouse a not violant succesful revenge makes the betrayed spouse stand up from the psichological hole and to find a second woman mate easilier. I think the earn the children custody that is the BEST, BIGGEST, FANTASTIC REVENGE at all. I give a list about some revenge stories, where the husband with excellent trics got the children custody from the cheating wives.
1. lucsmith "Let the Punishment fit the Crime"
2. FrancisMacomber " The Six O'clock News Slot"
3. itmgr2010 "Black & Tan Blues Ch. 04"
4. cpete "Blood from a Turnip"
5. curious2c "Was She Ever My Wife?"
There are some more excellent stories, where the exhusband was more succesful with the children custody, but those have not saved in my favorits. Unfortunately I am afraid to fill the favorit collection too quickly................
I mean its great that you support a good author but maybe you can offer a little bit of critique, positive or negative, amongst your fanboy-you-are-the-best-like-in-ever-screams. How is he going to evolve and get even better as an author if he gets no hints at all? What exactly you people liked so much or maybe what you didn't like regardless of the overall greatness of the story.
Sorry but it had to be said, reading your comments is like lissening to the canned laughter in comedies.