All Comments on 'Love Letter Ch. 03'

by LilMami07

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bredrebredreover 12 years ago
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Great update,,,,please, please update soon

NightpleasureNightpleasureover 12 years ago

This was truly a great update. Hope chapter 4 is coming realy soon.

kelleigh0127kelleigh0127over 12 years ago
Need the next Ch. like yesterday ;-)

I hope Chapter 4 comes around so much sooner. I really wonder where this story is going??? Will her bestie ever truly guess who the father is???? More please

mariasmdmariasmdover 12 years ago
umm

this was a great update, but what took you so long? :(

AshleyLovebookAshleyLovebookover 12 years ago

Just finish reading all three chapters and can't wait to read the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Oh Nooo!

I'm excited to see what's next....Giselle gotta give Brian a chance especially for the baby! Good job

honeybreehoneybreeover 12 years ago
wonderful update will be looking for Ch. 4

I can't wait to see where this goes as well. How long can Giselle truly hide her pregnancy? I mean sooner or later the beans are going to spill and I wonder how would change the dynamics of her friendship with Ashley. And hopefully brian step up to the plate especially if he is older than her, I always thought the girls was older than him mmm...but they both maybe need to grow up. Great updaate

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOover 12 years ago
Now

that they are back talking and semi getting along, it ends-hilarious...

He needed to man up, now that he has she is not accepting of him-strong for her, bad for the both of them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
LilMami,

What's your blog

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

sorry I'm kinda confused are they in high school or college/university? love the story btw

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

She need to tell her mom. She won't be able to hide the baby bump too much longer. Mom will be more disappointed in her hiding the pregnancy then her getting pregnant.

She need to stop being stubborn and let Brian back in her life completely. She is pushing him away and her baby will be minus a parent. Hopefully Brian will continue to be in her life.

KittyOh48KittyOh48over 11 years ago
Good story, hitting me very close to home!

I can understand how she feels' I was in the same position many years ago. I had a baby with my best friend and did not tell my mother until it was too late. She was very disappointed but she supported me and my baby. I got a job to help out and eventually married my best friend. Now 29 1/2 years later we are still married. Elle' needs to stop being stubborn, it makes the situation a lot worse than it needs to be!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Oh well, another one

This is what I seriously dislike about a number of authors here, they don't finish their work timely or many times at all. I know life gets in the way, yeah we're using part of our lives reading these stories, but here's an idea: How about writing the ENTIRE story when you're able, on your own timetable. Then, post a few chapters at a time, maybe every two weeks until you're done. That way, you won't have delays because of writers block or just life and there won't be the constant apologizing for not updating timely or the waste of the reader's time . Seems like a reasonable enough solution.

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The other thing is that some authors will get three or four stories going at the same time and don't finish any of them. I slipped on this one, but I'm going to start looking at the last chapter to see if the story was completed, especially if there has been no updates in a number of months. If it's been more than 3 months, I won't read it.

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I know writing is hard, but if you don't have the will or time, do us all a favor, just don't start it.

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The blog isn't anymore updated.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Hey Lil Mama

I was just rereading this story for the umpteenth time and I hope that you decide to finish it. It's a great story.

london101london101over 10 years ago
wheres the rest

??????????

chocolatesistachocolatesistaover 10 years ago
on pins and needles

she's such a liar, please update with more

brownskinnedcutiebrownskinnedcutiealmost 10 years ago
I like this story

I now know that Giselle is srill in higj school and Brian committed statutory rape. Makes me sad!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Brownskinnedcutie

It was made known that Giselle is in college in Ch. 1

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