by Belisana
When are you writing Ch.03? This story would benefit from being continued even though it is good.
Not bad...a little unrealistic. Most folks don't fall that fast. Yet, this is fiction, so...
PHEW! Like i said before, sweet, short and to the point, So damn HOT!!!!!! ** I LOVED IT! **
This is a very good story with two likeable main characters and some good erotic action. My only quibble is that it seemed to finish a bit too abruptly---you could probably have got another full page out of it without spoiling the tale. However, well done.
I wish we could hear more about these too,Bri moving in,their lives living together etc.
Wonderful story.
Belisana this is a brilliant story and will you write more about these two Teri and Bri as I would like to know when Bri ,moves in and will they get married as they both love each other and will they have children as they are truly fallen in love and not just the sex but being lovers, best friends and just want too be together forever thank you.xx
😳 The end was an hard landing ...... All in all lovely great and then peng one sentence finale grande