All Comments on 'Love, Trust and Communication Ch. 03'

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bruce22bruce22over 9 years ago
Not a bad effort

The story seems to have more of the character of erotic couplings, The story did seem to move forward very much here, still there were many interesting details. The food sequence has me remembering that novel where the author opened every chapter with a recipe.

racoon1174racoon1174over 9 years ago
Finally

Finally we get to some hot sex. It was a great build up showing the romance but a little slow in the erotic part. Maybe a better fit for this would have been the novels and novelas category as it blends a lot of elements.

dozendozenover 8 years ago
Pinot Gringo!

Perhaps you meant pinot grigio?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Four

Four pages,three of which were just pure crap.

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I am married to my first (and only ) wife of 38 years. Only in my extended family, (two continents) has there ever been unfaithfulness. There has been divorces, remarriage, trials and tribulations. Life is messy, I look toward building bridges, not tearing them down. In th...