by erosdon
Hey Erosdon, Why are you talking about "negative comments", I see only great comments. If there are idiots who wish to say anything negative, that is just their hypocrisy due to the fact that they cannot write a story as well as you do. Just ignore them.
Like the erotic & incestuous conspiracy. Shyam should not like what's happening. Just keep dishing it out mate.
6th chapter is coming along slowly. lost heart with negative comments, that's why stopped writing in midst. will resume and soon post the next chapter. thanks for some encouraging words.
Hope Manish falls in love with Neeta and want her for himself. Will Neeta extend her holiday with her brother's family? will Sumitra encourage the liaison? Will Manish's cousins find out? What about the marriage proposals for Manish? Will Shyam be devastated? Wow waiting to find out.
Want Manish to propose marriage only to Neeta, Want to see Neeta in Bridal saree & all the jewellery & showing her navel. Want Manish to make Neeta pregnant