All Comments on 'Lovers For A Short Time??'

Excellent story; I couldn't stop reading! The descriptions and pacing were perfect and I could practically feel their lust. Love the ambiguous ending too. When he asked her to ask him to come in, I thought maybe he was a vampire; but when you got to the mirror scene, I knew that was wrong. So many layers in this short, simple story!

Great story, well written. However, you did have quite a few spelling errors in the beginning if the story. Once those r fixed., this would be a 5-star story!!!

Nice erotic tale, but tastefully done. Was fast paced as advertised.

Agree with comment re spelling errors. It does detract from the flow of the story.

This first of yours I read. I'll do more. You don't disappoint.

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I hope you write another chapter. It would be nice to read what happens when they meet again.