All Comments on 'Lovers' Oath Ch. 03'

Great job! Can't wait for the next chapter!

the plot thickens =)

There are other ways to establish his status. If she really is an alpha, she'll be putting him in his place soon.

I feel for Rohan. Having to put his pack above his personal life must be extremely hard, that and the fact that he has no idea Ryan is his mate ( I hope). Being fearful of hurting her has left him at a loss of how to deal with her directly. It seems to me that Kiel should step up and help not only his Alpha but also his friend Ryan. I'm moving on to chapter 4 now.

Hmm, the connection that Rayn can establish with Rohan, is it similar to the one she has with Kiel? Of the two, Rohan is the only one displaying any kind of true affection for her. While Kiel seems preoccupied with wanting to bed Rayn, and turning her into a warrior for an unknown war. Pressing onto chapter 4