All Comments on 'Loving Maid'

nice, believable back story, pacing, and plot. Well done!

Attractive, fetish friendly and very willing to experiment with no panty strings attached, to my clean shaven genitalia?

Join a lonely hearts Club, would be my advice! Most men are already tired of game-playing have experieced rejection by expecting sensual excitement, on this internet roundabout!

Too Ho Hum to be considered exciting my dear. Is sex passing the authoress by, in this case? Sad, but potentially true to form, whilst hunting the net for available lonesome partners!

Good, believable atmosphere, realistic dialogue, just kinky enough to be interesting without going overboard. Well written except for the glaring 'finally-finally'....

Finally Mr. Gardner let out a long breath. His stroking slowed. Finally he tugged

Nice work, keep it up!

Thanks for sharing a super hot fantasy!

Great story. Hope it will continue. Nice pace and content.

Loved the story...next chapter please!

Some novel and erotic ideas here. A pleasing story with a freshness and sparkle I liked. Your best yet. I thought this was good and hope you will carry it on.

a great working relationship. very fun and respectful.

Loved it :-) would have been even better if he had to stay on the 'phone whilst she made him cum. Still, excellent work!

i loved this, please continue!

Thanks!

First this is a hot fucking story!!! I love it :D

But I love that you put a story behind it.

Please write more!!!!!

Nice premise. Think I liked the way it started the best.. Nice touch having her cleaning topless all day. Need to know what happened later that night!

AMAZING !!! It;s been 4 years, but I still have hope you will return to finish this. Please DON'T change the POV, this girl is just too cute !

This story is fucking wonderful. The way she sucked him, and then played with the cum on her tits. Really got me going. I echo the sentiment of another commenter in saying I hope you come back to finish.

Hi,

Loved Part 1: when do we get to read Part 2 ?

Kind regards,

Random Robbie.

Excellent story. I just wish there was more of them.