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All Comments on 'Loving My Aunt: Trip to the City'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
There is a PLACE

There is a place you are not currently located at...

Their is the possessive of (ie: belonging to) them...

Pleas goo bak 2 skule befor u rite enny mor storiez,

cuz uz aint veri gude @ rytin stuf.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago
I take it English isn't your first language.

This story is awful. Past tense/present tense, words missing. You need to read more good stories that are constructed properly and have actual grammar.

You writing is just terrible.

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