All Comments on 'Loving Sister Ch. 01'

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Anonymousalmost 12 years ago

CRAP

CRAP, nothing but CRAP

Anonymousalmost 12 years ago

WTF was this?

Anonymousalmost 12 years ago

better go back to the drawing board.... this was pretty bad.

Eric_Shift almost 12 years ago

I liked it.

I must be too unlettered to see the supposed crap.

Cest la vie

Anonymousalmost 12 years ago

I liked it too!

I liked the feeling of uninhibited sex between siblings, keep going. I wanted to see more scenarios.

Anonymousalmost 12 years ago

rushed

it was very rushed and needs a good editing sounds like a plot outline not a story.

Anonymousover 8 years ago

Damn!

What is it with you people and anal. What a turn off and absolutely kills a story. Damn, what a waste. I quit reading your stuff and went on to someone else. Crap!

prop69 almost 5 years ago

I gave you 5 stars.

Sick and a little perverted, but got me hard and horny. AWESOME sex.

Can’t wait for the next chapter

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