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by maadmaax

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

Could use a little more background on the girl and the guy. Overall, not bad. More description is all it needs.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Interesting

Very good start. You are introducing characters with little background but, with a lot of suspense. Keep it up I think this has potential. Looking forward tho the next installment.

Mike S.

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