All Comments on 'Lucian Ch. 10'

This was the ending I was hoping for. Though I was hoping Parker and her vile staff would get more a comeuppance but this is still satisfying! Thank you for your story!

You had over 22,000 views on the first chapter. And while you've maintained a high score for all the chapters (another author beloved by the site) the number of views has fallen off the cliff to less the 2500 on the latest chapter. I think that should tell you how badly this has gone. UGH!

when someone chooses to post a negative critique using Anonymous.

Grow a set and put your name to your words.

I liked your story. I have to admit ... it was a little long and there were times I found myself skipping over paragraphs, but I do that with mainstream authors as well.

I'm pleased with the way the story ended and, based on my enjoyment of this tale, I'll read your other submissions.

Cheers,

Amber

Thank you so very much for this much needed example of how to create! Much needed example of story building.

I really enjoyed this series. I had passed it over for some time but I'm very glad i decided to give this series a chance.

Well done, very well done.

awesome story