All Comments on 'Lucky Alex Ch. 04'

Whether at home or away - these two girls turn each other on in a big way. Very hot steamy sex!

the story is good,but short.

what is duddle146 talking about? There aren't any girls having sex, this is a very good story.

I have to agree with both comments here. duddle146 is either commenting on a different story out out there somewhere.

Also with the anonymous comment of the chapters. These could've easily been put into a single story instead of broken into multiple short short chapters. While I have enjoyed the story up to this point I have to give the small critique of the chapters should be together instead of broken apart.