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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Good, But...

Very hot story, but when you are writing about a woman's footwear, the word is spelled "heels" not "heals"! I hate to nitpick, but it happens all too frequently on Literotica and it seems English is your native language so it really shouldn't happen.

Please check your story for errors before submitting them - We will enjoy them that much more!

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