All Comments on 'Luke and Amy Ch. 10'

Every chapter continues to be worth the wait!

Another great chapter. So many romantic bits besides the more exciting parts, hehe. Love it! Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the awesome work! ^__^

Another fantastic chapter!!!

Once again, Miss Two Shoes has showcased her artistry and creative writing talent by penning a tale that is full of arousal, love, humor, and dirty sex all wrapped into one genuinely compelling tale. It’s no wonder that this brilliant author won first place in the Summer of Love writing competition. She deserves all the accolades that she receives for her writing. Great job Miss Two Shoes. Chapter Ten is another page turner and well worth the wait. Where other writers go for the quick zing, you take the time to develop characters and build arousal. Anyone that doesn’t give you a top rating for this story is seriously just jealous of your writing talent and envious that they can’t compete with you. Keep up the great work. I can hardly wait to see what happens in Canada. Rogue

I've really enjoyed reading about these two incestuous siblings. They've been lucky so far not being caught, but with each passing day, it's going to be difficult to keep their secret. I want to see how all this plays out in future chapters.

Superb story.

So glad to have another wonderful chapter of Luke and Amy. They were missed badly, however I also want to congratulate you on your amazing Summer of Love story! You definitely deserved to come in 1st place!

This was a fun and loving chapter that featured fast, hard, great sex between these fabulous siblings. I'm eager to find out if the skank (aka supposed friend) from the mall gives Amy any grief the next day at school. Thank you so much for the chapter, I will continue checkinfrequentlyly for future chapters. I did see on your page though that they will be farther in between so I won't worry, I know they are in great hands w/ you!

Thanks again, I loved it!

That was one of the nicest stories I've read on Literotica. Not sure if I want it to continue any more but you never know

A friend of mine recommended this story to me, and and i was very pleased with it. I love the relationship between Luke and Amy and look forward to more chapters in the future. Congrats on the 1st place in summer of love you earned it.

After a short interlude while you wrote a romantic story that won the contest (MANY congratulations to you on that), you are back with one of the sweetest story series I've ever seen. I just hope Luke and Amy also get to go to Montreal and have a great time there. It will be tough seeing them part for good (or for the rest of the term), I hope they get things worked out before then. The piece of music she composed was a nice touch.

Congratulations on your 1st place finish! Also so glad Luke and Amy are back! Greatly missed, but well worth the wait. It my favorite ever story series on Literotoca. I'm a fan or yours!

Another great chapter. It is like a visit from old friends. I do love how much they are in love. I like the fact that every moment is a stolen moment.

I still don't like the Ethan part. It makes their relationship seem cheap and dirty to me. I am not sure what purpose his character serves to the plot. I don't find Luke's reaction to his friend perving on his girlfriend to be realistic. There is no guy I know who would willingly share his girl. Guys are territorial creatures by nature and would not share and never in such a new relationship.

That is just my opinion. Take for what it is.

Keep up the great work I will be awaiting the next visit from these two friends.

After u finish the story u should make a movie

I have been hooked on this story since I "came" across it last week!!! I have been keeping myself awake continuously reading it. I am left craving more. Need to read about their trip to Montreal (being Canadian, its a sense of pride). Looking forward to the next installment!!!

i have been waiting for chapter 10 for a while! i read every one of them multiple times! this is amazing! i think chapter 11 should contain their trip, chapter 12 show while hes gone for a little bit then skip straight to months ahead of summer and her with them! maybe them getting secretly married and having kids and living together! im hooked but please no more of anyone else but them having sex i thnk it tends to take away from them as lovers.

You gotta make more chapters, you just gotta, this story is amazing cant wait to see what you've got in store next

All I can say is wow!! You are an excellent writer, the best in my opinion! This is the most amazing story I have ever read and I never want it to stop! Please keep the chapters coming but leave all the sexual encounters between Luke and Amy. (:

Luke & Amy hate having to hide their love, as would any lovers. I like that Ethan, as a surrogate for us readers, tells them their relationship arouses him. In the mall, April speaks for us by saying "if he was my brother I'd be all over him". Having Amy flirt with others as foreplay, including jerking off their cousin is also very hot!! Pls keep Ethan involved (& included in the sex)! My personal pref might be to have Luke take Amy out in a slutty dress & heels & meet April & Madison again, leading them to suspect what's going on! Keep up the excellent work whatever you decide to do!!

I've enjoyed this story immensely! I'm most impressed with how kinky they can be with each other, and yet still keep it loving and even romantic! That's a tough balance to keep even without adding the incest element. I really hope you plan on continuing this series.

This is one of the best story's i have read on this site. I didnt want to stop reading. I'll be looking out for the next chapter, so dont keep us waiting too much longer!!!

I loveeee this series! Makes me so wet and horny please submit next few chapters!!!

Please, its been to long since the last chapter We want more. PLEASE!!!!!!

You are clearly immensely talented.

Enjoyed this series. Wow! You have a bona fide book here. I look forward to reading your other material.

I don't want to hurt your feelings, so please don't take this personally. I'm only trying to be helpful, as I'm older than you and using the hard-learned lessons of 20 years as a professional writer. This bugs me too much to say nothing about it: the business with Ethan and Matthew and the anal stuff are simply awful. Yuck! Quelle horreur! I know this also bothers a lot of your other fans. And we wouldn't say such things if we didn't care—and not if you hadn’t MADE us care about these characters, Luke and Amy (my sister's name, BTW), by the skill of your writing. You can do better—I KNOW you can!

The story started out in Chapter One very sweetly and plausibly (apart from the anal nonsense and the unappealing past with Derek; Amy should have been a virgin, deflowered by her brother; see my story, "The Storm"). The enthusiastic nodding and bouncing on Luke's lap made Amy very real to me and enormously appealing. But later adding Matthew and Ethan at all really "jumped the shark," as they say.

Amy is presented early on as so charmingly and realistically innocent. Your descriptions of her body, especially her beautiful breasts, are sheer poetry. But the further excessive "adventurousness," shall we say, is wholly out of character with the already-established traits of sweetness, innocence and—seemingly at first, anyway—only having eyes for Luke. It's inconsistent characterisation, and it needs to be heavily rewritten. Also, the time frame is impossible.

The entire sixth chapter (as I think it is; the impertinent misadventure with that damned Ethan) and anything having to do with anyone but Luke must be utterly jettisoned. To do otherwise is to weigh down your story with so much ballast that it won't take off.

And Luke must change his final plans. He must either not return to Germany, or he must take Amy with him—THAT'S IT. Ethan taking care of her? I hope Ethan is struck by a bloody car!

Luke and Amy must not be shown as having what effectively amounts to divided hearts. Theirs must be a true and EXCLUSIVE love—you know, fairy tale stuff.

PLEASE—just think about it. You have the makings of a professional, and I truly think you can do better.

Feel free to see "The Charm," "The Storm" and "The Pianist" and tell me what you think. You may love them! Or you may want to rip me to shreds! Either way, let me know. I can take it, and I welcome your comments.

Still, overall, I would give you an "A" for effort. Your tale is a compelling one, and you must find a national publisher. Kresley Cole is a big hit, you know, so there's definitely a market.

Hope to hear from you! Best of luck in your endeavours.

—Highest regards,

Tristan Sparrow

Meant to add that Luke should have exploded all over Amy's wonderful breasts—NEVER inside her, not unless she's menstruating or older than 45.

I loved reading your stories they are so hot and I love each story!

I have to agree with what Tristan Sparrow said. Your story is amazing, but the extras, specifically the addition of Matthew takes away from the overall narrative. It is your story so I won't suggest any conclusions, but I do hope that whatever direction you choose, the fairy tale that Tristan suggested is present.

I'm afraid the author has abandoned this story. I really hope that is not the case as this is easily my favorite story on the entire site. I really want to know how the Germany thing works out and how then end up in life. Please don't abandon us. We have loved your story almost religiously. It's way too good to not have a proper ending!

I've really enjoyed reading this series, and hope that you can find the time to continue their story.

It took me quite a while to read the entire story, but it was...ahem...worth it. I love the incest angle anyway, but the love these two have for each other rings true with every word of dialogue. Thanks for keeping me stimulated through ten chapters.

Keep writing!

~Tori

Please continue their story. I would like to see a chapter or two about their Montreal trip. Then I at least need a happy for their story. Great writing!

I'm really disappointed in the fact that you abandoned not only your audience, but the great story and the characters within it. I really wish you'd come back but, due to the long pause, I see that highly unlikely.

I agree with anonymous who thinks you should come back to this story.

Please keep them coming thow there sib's I feel its a true love story hope to read if they get married and have kids

Can't believe this story has not been completed. I want to know the outcome. Don't leave us hanging. I've enjoyed every single chapter x

The point of the ending here is for you "they very sexy readers" to come up with your own conclusion. Of corse it should e finished completely but this is an acceptable ending if the author has writers block or life does not allow time to continue the story

I have thoroughly enjoyed your work and would like to see more.. much more. It is by far one of the best romantic incest stories I've read on the site. I will admit there are elements of your story that are just not my thing but to say that it should be left it is wrong. I personally don't like the whole involving other guys and the suggestion of ethan being involved with amy while luke is in germany but this is your story.

Now as for feedback on the story as a whole I would have preferred if the whole workup to them becoming sexually involved to have taken baby steps instead of going right to on the first day, also the idea of her being a virgin would have made added to the innocence. Along with their "first time" their first time with ethan should have also taken a bit longer to happen again in baby steps. Beyond that my only other suggestion is that the should have been more "making love" moments like the first night of chapter. 9 especially and it should have happened sooner in the timeline with it becoming a more occurance as you show their relationship envolve.

As for future chapters yes I'm looking forwards to montreal, what happends when he goes to germany, and when she comes to see him during summer, and lastly the ever after chapter. Along with that I would to see them have the discussion about babies espically after Amy little deal with the birth control pills and maybe even use Amy's jealous as a means to stir things up a bit.

All in all a great story but like anything it can be better and I'm looking forward to whatever you have in store for us.

This was a very good story but you could have made it better if you hadn't made Amy such a slut. For example, she claims to have had only one lover but she can deep throat her brother like a very experienced hooker. She claims that no one's

cock ever filled her up like Luke's. That would indicate an experienced girl with a number of other lovers.

At her first opportunity, she has a significant amount of sex with her brother's friend, Ethan, then plans to screw Ethan. Well unless you believe, as Bill Clinton did, oral sex is not sex, I think that Amy is just a slut, the high schol punch board, has round heels, etc.

Shocking that she indicates to her brother that she is a 10 when it comes to sucking cocks & she will perform anal sex the first chance that she has. Wouldn't she attempt to go slowly so as not to give her brother the impression that she is a first date fuck or suck girl, with the whole high school.

Then, the mystery portion. As slutty as she is, willing to traipse around Montreal with her ass showing, etc., she writes Ravel's Bolero for a class. Has had straight A grades throughout school, plays the piano like A concert pianist, cooks great meals like a culinary artist, does hair & make up like a professional, while tying bow ties for everyone.

All of this is mysterious when all she wants to do is have sex with her brother and rationalizes that her brother's friend band her cousin Mathew are all right to perform sex acts with because her brother condones her actions, in spite of e fact that he and he have indicated that they have no interest in sex nor would ever desire another lover.

It would be nice to continue the story until Luke returns to Germany and find that she is so upset that she goes back to the bar in Wrigleyville, find the stud that wanted to take her to his condo & have him arrange a train for her to pull with with a dozen or so participants for a weekend.

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The only thing I didn't like was that the story hasn't finished. What about their trip? Do their parents ever find out? How does Ethan fit in after Luke goes back to Europe? Arggggg! Frustrating.

Absolutely love this story. Please continue if at all possible. Their love story if unbelievable. I hope that if you continue this story that their love continues to grow and that Ethan isn't used to break them apart. I agree with a previous poster that chapter 11 should be their trip to Canada, chapter 12 should be about the months until Luke graduates but under no circumstances should Amy get overly involved with Ethan that would just plain suck, and then maybe ending with chapter 13 with Luke and Amy living together as a couple in the open somewhere and loving and enjoying each other and there life together. Again Miss GoodyGoodyTwoShoes you have created a wonderful and endearing love story between Luke and Amy. Thank you.

Why didn't Amy ever get DP'd by Luke and Ethan?

So far it has been all MMF. How about FFM?

good love story just need to have an ending

Each chapter have you rushing to read the next! Just wish GoodyGoodyTwoShoes would give some closure.

i cant find the words to tell you how incredibly erotic this series is. it has been a few years since you finished chpt.10 so either you have abandoned the story or 'something came up' so i will use my imagination to finish it...good job so far!!!

I loved every page of it. One moment it was sweet and loving, the next red hot and rampant. Your style can change so quickly and so effortlessly, it's great to read.

If I have any criticism, it's that you spent too long at the wedding but none on the spring break. After shopping for all the hot outfits, it would have been great to have read about her wearing them and teasing the hell out of Luke and others in Canada. But sadly, spring break never happened.

As for the characters, Amy must be every blokes dream girl. Clever witty, practical, hot and sexy; what more could a bloke want? Not sure when it happened, but somewhere along the way, I fell for Amy big time. Oh to have met a girl like her when I was young............

Although it's over 2 years since you wrote chapter 10, it's not too late for one final chapter covering spring break, so go on, let us know what happened, please !

As for the finale, I have two alternative endings in my mind.

Firstly Luke qualifies in Germany, then applies for and gets a teaching job at Northwest, Amy moves in with him and they remain there together for many years.

Secondly, she skips Northwest and instead goes to uni in Germany. Because no-one knows her as his sister and they already share a name, they live as husband and wife and raise a family there. No idea how they tell their family and friends though, haven't worked that out yet !

But anyhow, a great story, which deserves a final chapter and an ending of your choice; just as long as they both live together and happily ever after !

The blow by blow description of each day is very entertaining but I would like to see how they navigate Luke's return to Germany and Amy's graduation. Does Amy join Luke in Germany for the summer? If she does is she introduced as his girl friend? When Amy starts university what does Luke do? When Luke graduates does he join Amy in the states? Do they figure out how to get married? Do they have children? Do any additional friends in Chicago learn about their relationship? Do they come out to their parents when the babies arrive?

Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!!

Ok, we need this to continue.... bring on chapters 11 -100!!!!

There is no reason to stop now.

I have just read the whole thing in one sitting. It's great. I want more.

Please give us more. I've read this story a few years ago and found it again. I feel like I've read about their trip to Canada , more time with Ethan and a renewed interest in Greta. Please add more chapters but don't break their hearts, or ours.

Thank you

I want this to go on what happened in Montréal. What. Happened when Luke went back to Germany and Amy went to north western did they ever get caught by their parents are they still together so please can we have some more of Luke and amy

This Series is great, needs more chapters.

I loved and hated this story. I loved the parts where Luke and Amy expressed their all consuming love for each other but hated the parts where Luke shared Amy or had her sexually tease the stranger in the restaurant and her cousin.

I confess I don't understand why anyone would want to sexually share the person they love with someone else, I don't understand why swingers do what they do. I'm not a prude, after all I'm reading sibling incest stories.

The story itself is brilliantly written and the sex between Luke and Amy is very erotic.

Sadly, the author hasn't written anything since 2012, although her bio seems to have been updated 2017. An entry in her bio in 2013 said that she was going through some personal issues and hoped to resume writing shortly.

Hopefully, one day the Luke and Amy story will get concluded.

You really need to complete this story

I hadn't visited with Luke and Amy for quite a while. Enjoyed your hot writing again. Very arousing. hal

Loved the story but hated the sharing . says to me he didn't love her just used her her.

This story sets the bar for incest romance. It manages to be gut-wrenchingly romantic and very kinky at the same time. The detail is perfect at both painting a picture of the scene and creating suspense for the upcoming incest themed sex. The scenes themselves are terrific and the amount of kinkiness crammed into these scenes somehow works.

Read this series years ago and read it again over the past several days. Just incredible. Writing this in the hopes that goodygoodytwoshoes will see it and maybe feel some happiness because this story certainly gave me happiness. I would also love more chapters or stories -- although the imagination can take over from here just fine.

Thank you so much for this amazing series.

Hello. As another reader commented, it made me jealous that Luke shared Amy. I loved the story otherwise, though, and really can't wait for it to be finished. I kept hoping they would decide to move to a state where they could legally get married, have children, and have the old "happily ever after" fairy tale. Anyway, excellent job

Like other posters, I was initially turned off by the sexual sharing and cockteasing. I even considered not continuing with it on at least one occasion. But I eventually came around and not only finished the story but bookmarked several of the chapters. I also marked these same chapters among my favorites. Now here comes the funny part: These chapters were the very ones that contained sharing or teasing!

If you read Ms.Twoshoes' biography there is language to the effect that she writes to challenge and titillate the reader. And that is precisely what she did with me. Once I could suspend my moralistic and puritanical upbringing I was able to accept that not everyone sees things as I do. Remember, Amy is not even out of high school. As such she belongs to a generation that views sex primarily as simply fun, rather than a curious1950s mixture of the sacred and the shameful. So why shouldn't she be able to enjoy more than one man, especially if her lover not only encourages it but enjoys it as an aphrodisiac? And after all, they are not doing it in the streets and frightening the horses.

A final thought: I disagree with at least one poster who wrote that the author needs to complete the story. I don't believe it is a writer's job to tie up every loose end and leave nothing to the imagination of the reader. Did they have fun in Montreal? Did they actually call, email or skype on a near daily basis for the duration of Luke's time in Germany? Did Luke live with/near Amy after returning? Are they still together today, these six years later? I believe that these questions can only be answered, if at all, in the the minds of the readers.

I’m very much looking forward to the next cause there’s no way you would not us hanging about their trip away and how they end up. Love this story for how there’s a actually story and not just great sex so thank you

The story was wonderful if you can continue it to Montreal so their date goes and then till he leaves to go back to Germany that would be good and maybe follow it up with what happens while he's gone I'd love to read those thank you.

Sexcellent series!

Great characters and development.

To address the whole 'cuck' complaint - I'm not into it (cucking), but then again I'm not into BDSM/Swinging/Water Sports or many (?) other types of Kink...but then they (you?) are, so I wont 'Kink Shame' by projecting my proclivities (or lack thereof) upon your writing and just enjoy the story for what it is - Flippin' Awesome!

I wanted to be a writer's friend, because... well, you know, there's a chance he/she could share. I mean, money :)

Am I the only one here who's jealous of Ethan? Lucky bastard, ehehe.

Hopefully Ethan remembers, that sharing is good, so he can really share Amy with the rest of his friends if he feels 'can't afford' to take care of it. Taking turns would be easier, right?

Well I suppose it's for the best it ends here as it seems the author was dead set on having her fuck someone else (Ethan by the looks of it, and the brother was all for it, like a cuck, ugh really). That just doesn't belong in an incest romance story especially one where the characters are constantly professing their love and devotion and need for each other to one another. It's a huge contradiction as far as I'm concerned. I'll just assume they lived happily ever after and involved no one else in their relationship, as it should be. :)