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Click here" Our first priority is to get you well. Then work on our relationship. I don't know what's going to happen with us, but I know I want to try. Do you?" Luke asked
"Luke, I'll do anything for a chance with you. Anything you want. All I ask is that you let me help you take care of Sean Anderson. I want him to pay for what he did to me. To us. I know you aren't going to let him go unpunished." She begged
"Allright. You've earned that right. But it will be awhile. I don't want to be linked to his disappearance. You get well first. Then we'll deal with that asshole. I promise. I know how to make him really pay for his crimes. Just wait." He assured her
He hugged her tight. "It's okay, Baby. Tomorrow is a new day. For both of us."
The End of Part II.
Look for Part III "The Final Revenge" Coming soon!
- COMMENTS
Anonymous4 months agoAs hard as it is to believe I have known people in the military that has done crazy stuff like this.
Ruttweilerover 1 year agoNo one will stop you from putting down the most illogical plots, boringly cardboard-like characters, and insipid dialog.
You have complete freedom to make an absolute ass of yourself and reveal yourself to be an abysmally poor writer.
Kaeyoover 1 year agoTrotted out the Super Marine Ninja Ranger Seal. Sometimes suspension of disbelief is near impossible.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoThat was awful. He dumps her for having one guy on the side but takes her back after she fucks hundreds? Riddled with STDs, missing teeth, and covered in tats and piercings? Sure, show some empathy and help her out. Feel guilty for BTB. Shows your human. But there is no "relationship" to work on. Please delete ch. 2 and skip ch. 3 as well.
Sexecutioneralmost 3 years agoFirst part was righteous, now you turned him into a RAAC wimp. So fucking unrealistic. Won't bother with the rest of this turd.
And the next Anonymous cuck boy who responds with weak ass shit at me? Well we know just what kind of spinless cocksucker you are....
26thNCover 4 years agoI like this story, but it's a little far fetched even for me. One of his war buds just happens to be king of the pimps who helps him rescue ex wife who has bottomed out. He is also a war hero with the MOH and the Navy Cross. Wow! But I'm all in now. Let's do chapter three.
26thNCover 5 years agoLet me catch up here. Wife cheats and belittles husband to his face. With all her education, she still ends up as a real whore with a mean black pimp. Ex husband just happens to pick her up on the street. Mean pimp goes all ghetto on him. He calls friend who Phd Psychologist, and the Uber Pimp. He takes wife for rehab, no drugs, just tats and piercings. Ghetto pimp is thumped, then executed. On to evil Sean now. I knew this guy was an elite Marine. I like the stories, but they need to a little less over the top. A Phd Psychologist who is the Big Pimp? Come on man!
Anonymousover 6 years agoYep......pure garbage.
Reminiscent of an evil stupid Buckeroo Banzai. Willie works for the President and drives a race car in his spare time doesn't he?
Anonymousover 6 years agoSurprised willie pimp doesn't have two or three Phd's. I think he wrote that paper that chapelle started to write, the one where he is studying white people. But willie, being a superior black ninja amazonian all-knowing pimp master got the goods on ol' whitey!! Bet he has another Phd in physics that he never told anyone else about, too. He'll be able to press a button and all the greedy white people gonna be disappearin' an shit!!
Wtf is this wack bs?
silentsoundover 7 years agoThis all started because she apparently is a size queen and Luke has a tiny dick.
This is laughable.
