All Comments on 'Lulu'

Please continue your story. It's obvious LuLu wants it, and daddy needs it. Take your time and let the story develope into a loving relationship between the father and daughter.

Glad you didn't lose your nerve ... great story ... would love to read more!

good story

Very good, but there wasn't enough build up. You should try to tease the reader more.

Forget "nerve" and keep writing with your heart. You did good. Should turn on "voting".

Yep u just need to finsh it u stop at the best part just as he was about to enter her & set her world a fire for the first time in her life & make her women.

Never mind the nerve just finish up the story.This story has the makings of a multi sub.story.Great story

This is hot, I was able to create good images in my mind from your descriptions. I kind of like the short on story beginning; it demonstrates lust more to me. You got my attention and now I ask for more.

RS

Wow, this story has such potential. Please keep going!

Can't wait for part 2!!

No, don't stop yet. It has serious potential ..

yes you must finish the story. it is wonderful

damn, I need to read them fucking. Your story is awesome. Don't stop.

Lulu was the Queen of a Bur-les-cue, TK U MLJ LV NV

You're doing well and HOT! I see a novella of possibilities. Love her inherent submissiveness.

It would be something if you would tell us about the outcome if it is true.

This story was hot from the beginning I couldn't help but touch myself. uuhhh I'm so wett

Keep going! You left off with some HOT foreplay... now i'm wet and ready for the climax!

Best fucking story ever I was so fucking wet after I read it

Please tell me you have the second part written and submitted somewhere or ready to submit! You left off on such a cliffhanger and it's been over a year since you posted.... Please please please PLEASE finish this!! This is a kickass freaking story!!!!