All Comments on 'Lynn and Bobby Ch. 01'

After half way through chapter 7, I just skimmed through the rest as it seemed to be just the same story. I don't know what that is all about, but the first part is a little hard to believe. Not too many men would be able to live with what was going on with his best friend and his wife. Quite erotic though, even if it was a little hard to believe. Thanks

The basic story was well written. Characters were well developed. A good story.

..............stars period

though I hated the characters and subject matter. I read the first and last page and then read the second to last page, third to last page and gave up and read the whole thing. I hate wimp cuckold stories (which, despite the characters going on otherwise, this was), but I was caught by the quality of the writting and entrigued by the last couple of pages. I have to say that in real life, my 'best friend' would be toast and my wife would be on the streets with as little as I could legally get away with. All her friends and relatives would be aware of her selfish actions. I would never consider taking her back. I'm not a big fan of scorched earth divorces, but the actions of wife and lover were unforgivable. Still, this story was very well written and had an unusual perspective to the wimpish husband and his thought processes.

My wife normally reads the longer stories but I rarely do. This was riviting reading all the way through. We both think you should write more. Looking forward to it. MORE PLEASE!!!! We also think the hate mail you get is some of the most entertaining for the longest time. Congratulations!!!

I always wonder at the premise of the 'big cock' stories, why this is regarded as some sort of unsurmountable (sorry for the little joke there) problem between a husband and wife. If the wife has this fetish to have a larger object in her orifice, well, hasn't anyone out there heard of dildos? They can be had in very large sizes, I understand. For that matter, there are strap-ons and extensions that a husband could wear. For that matter, if a wife needed a really large tool used on her, there is a thing called 'fisting'. <p>

So why is it that the only solution is to bring in a third party? I will leave that judgement up to other readers, but I suspect that the motivation must be more than just having a large cock. And in this story, it included the opportunity to be cruel and humiliate the spouse.

Typical sad husband

You'll find a first person story of a guy loving his wife enough to let her carry out a big dick infatuation. It won't be pretty but it's not too ugly, if you can stomach the first few pages - (I had to force myself on page 3; I don't dig that, no I don't.) - you might find something evolving that's worth your effort. I do not think I'd have the cojones to wade through all this mess and emerge. - - Oh, and it's over on page 7. The rest is just a double post. - - Thx writer for a disturbing yet entertaining tale surpassing many here.

Love the details, emotions and story. Some will say its too long and to each their own. I love the emotions that run the spectrum. Makes you realize erotic fiction can be more than 2 pumps and done. Looking foreward to more!

Wow, so much emotion in that story. Great job. Defiantly better than anything I read in english class.

Couldn't stand to read but bits and pieces. Bobby is better off married to a call-girl that works 5 1/2 days a week, every week. It pisses me off to read of a husband or wife tolerating this crap and to be put into a category of "Loving Wives" instead of "Hoes & Pimps or One Too Many or Straight-jacket Spouses or Just Plain Slut (m/f)". No wonder in reality, in most marriages someone is cheating or tolerating the others actions.

I thought it could have been condensed to make it a little shorter but I'm amazed at how well you capture the emotion. The jealousy as a man sinks a big cock into a wife, the humiliation as she moans about how good it feels to have him that deep in her body. The knowledge that the only way you will ever get even close to being that deep in her would be using a rubber dildo.

Great job on the story.

Lots of ah-ha moments and plot twist and a great ending. You're a very engaging and erotic writer.

The first part made me cringe, sympathetic pain for Bobby, hatred for Bill, disgust for Lynn. Such strong emotions your words evoked. But just as I was thinking, I can't take this any more, everything changes. Sympathy for Bobby turns to admiration for his heroic strength of character. You kept using the term Rock Hard. Maybe that should have been your title?

I kept thinking, he can end this, he has to end this, why doesn't he avail himself of various accoutrement, why doesn't he put his foot down? I was convinced there was no way you could ameliorate Bobby's pathetic acquiescence. I'm still amazed you did it. You turned Bobby into the he-man hero, the epitome of quiet strength.

Don't judge a book by it's cover. Don't judge a character until the author has fully revealed him. That really was an amazing play on conflict and strength. Bravo!

writers like you disgust me. You desire to make your sad and pathetic thoughts real by pretending that there are these uncontrolable urges that just justify everything. When the scum bag down the street takes your six year old child, bends them over and rapes their ass, you'll not call the cops, you wouldn't freak out right Lynn?. cause you understand, you know that there are these uncontrollable urges that justify everything... afterall, the wife and best friend in your story aren't at fault, they couldn't help themselves. Lynn, people like you are the aboslute SCUM of our society... I bet you don't take responsibility for anything in your life do you? and don't fall back on that crap about this just being a story bullshit... this story came out of your useless mind... it is you who decided to invest the time and energy to write this crap

This is probably the most disgusting thing I have ever read on Literotica.

I've read this story before, but having read others of your I returned to this one. You did do something that few if any other authors did. You turned the husband from a wimp to a man that endured and won. You also turned the wife from a whore to a woman that "gets it" and both are rewarded.

Rare, very rare, but excellent.

retarded. You are retarded.

this is so freaking repetitive. you lose track of what the characters are thinking and what they are saying because you could copy in paste dialouge from one page to the other. the story line was great but the long winded ending was like reading tolkien. cut it down

you certainly don't write like one, you don't appear to have the slightest first hand knowledge of a woman having sex, especially with a large penis... this is written as if the author NEVER had a sex life. The author of this story has NO respect for woman... you've written about a woman and reduced her to a panting dog in heat... is that you view of woman? and you claim to be a woman? seems like a miss to me. Lynn, I think you should sit down in front of a mirror and take a long hard look at your life.

Women are quite frankly bitches on heat, forgive the crude nature of my language - but from my own experience, women are just looking out to satisfy their own desires, and as such screw anyone who gets in their way. I may have only had bad experiences with them, but please if YOU feel that you are the exception to the selfish woman stereotype I am sending out here, step forward. I bet you my life's savings, your just as selfish, crude and sickening as the rest of them. As to the story - a woman able to gain redemption of a sort is a lovely tale and kudos on being able to make a story make sense. Take no notice of the criticisms - they are simply the average crowd we have here who get off on the fallen angel archtype of a woman unable to stand up for what they believe in. It is just that though, a story of a make-believe situation where a woman is able to control herself.

..of the very few, greatest pieces of erotica ever written, and I've read most, all the greatest novels included. It fulfills a much needed lack in the genre, something we all sometimes subliminally think about without actually formulating it. Incomparable.

Lynn, whoever you are, you are what Jews call a real mensch. Human, humane, wise, passionate - I always judge by passion first - and right on the nail, going straight to the nitty-gritty and the logical conclusion of this sort of situation.

I certainly hope you're not paying any attention to the misguided comments coming through from the cynics and dorks. Keep at it, don't blink, you've got many fans of the right type. I laud you.

Some people criticize you because they don't like cuckold wimp stories. So why don't they read something else. But why does the story pretend that "The Fetish" is unusual. What woman won't hunger for an extraordinarily huge, hard cock? It's more realistic when Bobby says Bill can fuck as many women as he wants. Bill gets off, reasonably enough, on humiliating Bobby to show that both husband and wife are subjugated to his sexual superiority. He should carry it further, getting Bobby to beg him to fuck his wife and explain it is because Bill is a real man. He should also make Bobby fluff him and clean him after he fucks Lynn, to show that he is sincere about wanting Bill to fuck his wife. Still, there is some good humiliation and cock worship and, except for very excessive repetition, the writing is much better than average for this site.

From a loving/interaction point of view, there is none. The woman you have developed has shown no insight, just a high schoolish mentality. This should be posted in the Fetish category. And please stop writing!

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I hate cuckold stories because it ain't gonna happen in my house. I hate cuckold stories because the husband is ALWAYS a wimp. This story is unlike any other story of this genre that I have read.

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Outstanding! This story is very very well written. The characters create drama and demand an emotional reaction from the reader (see comments). You hate them, you love them and all with a real plot twist in the end. I also liked your "female point of view". I am going to read all your postings. Thanks very much.

Well done.

This story had me absolutely glued to it. I wasn't turned on by the sex at all as that was used to portray the events. as a woman I went through a mix of emotions, I gasped and was horrified at the humiliation and even cried. I was very moved with the ending. well done.

Totally loved every aspect of it. The mystique of it had me totally hard from start to finish. Went through a similar situation in my life. Can totally relate.

We live in a throw away society so if something is not working right you repace it. His wife and marriage are busted so they both need to go to the trash. It's a shame to waste your obvious literary talent on trash.

Ph and that is exactly what you are! Get some mental help you sick, twisted up, mentally ill. bitcH!!!

1 brain dead attached to a slut. if if were me there would be 2 kicks 1 to his nuts so nothing would ever work again and 1 to her ass as i kicked her to the curb and shit on the whores head

try to stay positive about the negative feedback & comments ,

in my opinion they are from the repressed and from those recently badly affected by experiencing adultery 1st hand . & who are still feeling Extremely angry & hurt .

very moving , very well crafted story, one of your better ones, it flowed very well, poetic.

very special to be able to play with emotions in your writing as well as you do.

xxxhugsxxx

about me.

in the past . (over it now)

i cheated (went on for a while)

wife found out , said was 2 choices , one month to decide

1. divorce.

2. an "open" marriage.

(she still loved me , but felt i would stray again & as that was going to be the case, she intended to have some fun as well) .

i chose option 2

18 months later we filed for divorce . we/i could not handle the open marriage

& lost something very special.

am in a fantastic long term realationship now,

we both have hurt & been hurt by our partners in a previous relationship(s) .

we are 100% monogamous, we talk openly ,we share everything (ithink)

we have no interest in straying (we work hard to ensure that don't happen).

our only indulgence is reading a variety of topics & genres on Literotica.

(its not the topic, but the quality of the writing that interests us)

& maybe in the future sharing our own storys

we privately do the "what if" , "what would you do in that situation" talks alot after reading storys here.

& the one final answer is always the same.

been there, done that, still got the T_shirt , the leather pants , the slutty outfit , the cuffs & harness .... and we ain't going back.

if what we have stops being special, if we lose the love , & talking about it, working it out between us fails ,

then we walk.

no further discussion / no 2nd chances / no falling under the bus .

one famous line summ's up all our lives .

WHAT HAS BEEN SEEN, CANNOT BE UNSEEN .

maybe in the future people like me & proly pple like you .

will be able to get a partial "mindwipe" & regain our innocence.

although that would beg the question , would we then repeat the experiences we had removed .. & fck, that then gets too complex for me @ this time of night.

who am i,

i lived the swinging "lifestyle"

i lived the bdsm "lifestyle" (dom/sub/switch)

i'm a recovering sex addict. no longer active/playing on any "scene"

i ain't going back.

godbless & be well

You're a ugly fucking pathetic women hating whore! Why do you feel the need to post this crap here? We don't need to know of your mental issues... really, we don't care. Get a life, lose weight, kill yourself... DO ANYTHING BUT SHIT ON THESE PAGES

Really enjoyed it. Some willing cucks hate the lifestyle but their love is used against them. Excellent job of showing the life cycle of the bull's conquest. Conquest is a different kind of satisfaction than a lasting long term relationship. For the cuck, one of the best "eyes wide open' I have read. I do not see or feel the hate mentioned by others. Closest thing to a cure that I have seen, the truth of our consequences. Please consider sharing more stories.

Very well written genuine insight.

You have the courage & creative inspiration to explore (& expose) the darkest corners of our souls.

It indeed is very difficult for one to be different. People are judgemental. People have pre-conceived notions. You can be your true self - at a price.

I hope for you a very painful cancer

Whereas the rendition of details is the author's own view of a particular ménage à trois, i want everybody to know that SOME MEN IT IS A MAJOR TURN ON IF HIS WIFE & HIS FRIEND DEMONSTRATE MUTUAL SEXUAL TENSION. WHEN THEY HAVE SEX IT IS A DREAM COME TRUE.

SOME WOMEN DO ENJOY A BIGGER DICK MORE THAN A SMALLER ONE.

SOME MEN GET EXTRA PLEASURE WHEN THEY FUCK SOMEBODY ELSE'S WIFE! IF THEY ARE EXIBITIONISTS THEY WANT THE HUSBAND TO WATCH.

Very well written!

4.7/5.0* = 94% = A

Yours truly has a very pronounced voyeur side & yes! a recently divorced buddy of mine with an XXL dick did get to fuck my wife... She admitted everything to me. It went on for 3 more weeks, so in those 3 weeks i was a willing cuckold.

Those situations are very strange. They do happen to people though, & some of them live happily thereafter!

Life is strange!!!

I would have let her move in with him,got a divorce,and the first time he threw it in my face he was fucking her, I would have beat him within an inch of life.i would then make a phone call and have him mysteriously chemically casterated

:-)

An author who thinks his lechery is the center of the world! But he is only a cuckold/wimp asshole and not a good writer!!!

i had a similar experience,, once I surrendered to it, and knew she still loved me. i got off on it .I was hoping you would have too, and got her an other guy with a huge cock to bring her to ecstatic intoxication,

A woman can take more than one man can give. let her if still still loves you.

I love seeing my woman being a slut, having her master give her to the gang,, see just how much she can take, and how much she can get off, and please guys.

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LynnGKS is a very good writer.

Her stories are about people whose sexual preferences and practices are still frowned upon by many.

Over the years i read a number of her stories and liked almost all of them.

There are lots of women that are like the the wife in the story, and every coin has two sides. There are men that maybe don’t like women that much and love seeing them weak to the point of being unable to control or resist the lust. I was one who got off on seeing a sexy woman being “fucked into submission “. The nastier the better. The ultimate, the pinnacle is of course the extremely hung black man or” nigger” if your racist.

Almost to much to bear for most men. The beautiful wife that is so corrupted that she punishes herself by allowing them to use her till she finds she likes it. It has the naughty factor for her with the humiliation thrown in.

This author never disappoints. Same old.cuck/whore spiel every time. She just writes the same story over and.over without fal.

Just another writer whose fantasy is way over the top. You can’t love a wanton whore or shameless slut. Once she continues to disrespect and humiliate him over and over the love will die and hate will grow. Another writer selling us on the stupidity of being a weak and willing cuck.

I can’t believe I read this whole piece of shit hoping this sick fuck would grow a pair

MC needs to read //Losing Paradise -- and More/ by BillandKate. A taser, a blindfold, a gag, and several zip ties are most of you need. Hard to imagine the 4-inch/no glans penis meeting the need of a Size Queen fetishist.

This is utter misandrist dogshit. The author should be ashamed for writing it.

Only works as a fantasy. I can’t believe that Bobby would accept his best?fiend to ruin his marriage with malice.Watching them fuck for 3 month is just too unbelievable.Also unbelievable was the way the wife treated him! And lastly, by the end of page too the hotness of the first two pages.

She doesn't deserve him.

Just drivel...this sentence, and i quote , "but I love you and I want to stay with you, if you'll have me, after he's finished with me." That's some sad pathetic shit right there...please let my wife say some shit like that to me so i can bring hellfire down.

It's funny how Bobby thinks a scandal would destroy a marriage but her having sex with his best friend wouldn't.

The story leaves one with a conundrum. Who was the most evil character in the tale. Was it the wonton wife for whom carefully constructed psychobabble excuses were proffered? Was it the supposed friend who gleefully and maliciously invaded the sanctuary of their marriage with the premeditated design to conquer, humiliate, and lay waste to the man who was supposedly his friend? Or was it Bobby, the gutless husband who contrived excuses to allow himself the position of empathetic bystander to the utter abasement & destruction of his life. Let me preface this next statement by saying that I reject violence as an appropriate avenue for solving marital dysfunction. What was missing from this piece were either a pistol, a nine inch butcher’s knife, a baseball bat, or a garrotte. The only question is who was truly worthy to be found on the receiving end of the justice they could meet out.

That was a nice and good well written story.

I was surprised there wasn't the shortcut of buying big rubber dicks.

I liked your writing style LynnGKS. I enjoy a good cuckold story. Sometimes even taking it to the extreme is fun if well executed. This story wasn’t much fun, but my imagination stops when a story becomes unbelievable. It’s hard for me to imagine any man taking the verbal abuse Bill gave him without standing up for himself. In my experience most guys are pretty polite when you let them use your woman. Admittedly there’s a wide range of experiences, this one is just hard to digest. But it does get a lot of positive feedback. That’s cool

For me, a 5. Many similarities to my real life story. Many differences, too, but I feel a little better about my choices after reading this. I will not be experiencing the ending, however.