All Comments on 'Lynn and Leif Forevermore Ch. 13'

So started reading at ch. 11 and I'm hooked. I like a funny hit steamy romance....but not mice.

Overall I like the story but its a bit slow moving. Maybe you could do 2 pages instead of one. And Lynne is starting to get slightly annoying but I guess that's because she is so naive. But keep up the writing because I am still reading.

and tell him what he needs to hear--they can take it slow and get to know one another. If she pushes him away, Leif will start sleeping around and that will be THE END.

You write a good story, but a few paragraphs does not make a chapter! I’m getting very annoyed with these tiny little “chapters”.