All Comments on 'Machine Story for Katie Ch. 02'

You just keep writing trash. There is no story, no theme, no value. Quit!

Thank you for your constructive criticism...on both stories. The funny thing is your attempt to irritate me actually gave me a pretty good chuckle this morning. The fact that you commented on the second one means you read the first, and proceeded to read the second after indicating that the first had 'all the appeal of a bucket of warm spit.' One would think if the first was that horrendous you might spare yourself the anxiety of reading the second. Part 3 will be out shortly. I'm sure you'll be looking for it. Any other comments would be appreciated.

I enjoyed your stories, both of them. They are well written with an air of mystery that makes me want more. Looking forward to the next portion.

It appears that this story was written years ago. Hard to figure where it was supposed to go. I received no pleasure from it.