All Comments on 'Maddy's Day'

Well written love story. The fact that you kept the love scene to that one point of time made the story for me. You handled the wanting / having experiences well. Your characters and dialogue were real. Thanks for a caring, thoughtful story.

I'm sure a number of us older people have had a "want" and you have told a great version of one of those.

Very well written story I loved the line in my comment it describes so much in so few words. Good luck in the contest :-)