by GrantLee
Glad to have you back. Looking forward to your continuation of this series and possibly other new adventures.
you are a superb storyteller...one of the best here but i somehow feel this story has veered into an unpleasant and rather boring cul de sac...it should be good... having gone from the cliche of paying the rent with her body to a sleazy peckinpah style mexican sex school but sadly it is not...please focus on a new chapter of your other series
See, you have so many fans and you keep them waiting for a very long time before the next instalment appears. Write more and write more frequently.
The first part of the Storyline is great, the last parts is getting to ruin the Story....
such a pity
paying rent with her body and blackmailed by the mexicans is great.....
maybe some force in the club in which she worked...
Please correct the storyline, let the last chapters be a nightmare of her and go back
please
and thank you for writing this great story, the first chapters i read many times...
please more from that
you are a really really good writer
The story is excellent. I hope that soon I will continue gangbang I would like Medison to get 2 dick in a pussy, in my mouth, I want to be covered with sperm gang boss
Mr Sanchez needs to marry Madison against her will and get her knocked up
Love Madison’s adventures and look forward to hearing what happens next?
Love this series. Madison deserves at least another episode to explore her personal '"development". Thanks for your various imaginative stories.
Thank you so much I have enjoyed the series so much I have ended up as wet as Madison I would love the story to continue as in a way i am envious of her. Thank you again Rose xxx
I would like read more about her inner turmoils.
She doesn't think much of her daughter, she doesn't cry, doesn't wheep and every guy she crosses is hung like a horse, thinks she is very tight and gives her an orgasm that she can't control.
Love to see Madison get away and back with her daughter, and going back to her job in the night club. She’s a great whore but give her some life to be a great mom and not abused as she is
Having Rebecca translate for her was an excellent touch. Somehow the fact that Madison can’t even understand what the men are saying but still has to let them fuck her, greatly increases the impersonality of her very personal relationship with them.
Words are unimportant, the only thing that matters is if thier cock is hard, and lust in thier eyes.
She doesn’t have be able to speak with them, just fuck them. Wow!
Ya know, Madison and Julie from “Julie’s mistake” might make a good team. Maybe for a few years Julie’s been fearfully hiding from Jackson working as late night waitress at diner and escort call girl. They become friends and eventually escape together and struggle to survive