All Comments on 'Maggie Mae - Techsan'

I can normally find a way to get into a story... But this one didn't do it for me at all.

WD

it's a ready made place for age-gap stories.

I think you did a good job of capturing the essence of a "Graduate" type story (of course, I'm probably the only one that remembers it).

Nice effort - regards, Jack

Well done! I like your take on this one. This is a good plot and setting, when combined with the growing up it just works. Well done!

I liked your take on the song.

Kudo's

DG Hear