All Comments on 'Magic'

ok ive read bad stories but this is worst, i mean seriously!! i would hav least punshed the guy a mean why is it that all these stories hav stupid women who let themselves be dragged around by the nose. lik that she believes him and doesnt even struggle hard....put some back bone into this girl for crying out loud!!!

Very nicely done. I'm awaiting your second chapter, as this one has peaked my interest. Don't keep your fans waiting too long now, okay.

I can't wait for the next chapter. This was a great chapter.

I can't wait to read more of this story!

-Katie

Well done lass this has great promise.

very promissing beginning!