All Comments on 'Make Me Pregnant'

Nice twist for two people that needed each other for different reason but to have the right goal... Loved the detail and the characters. Glad everything turned into a plus. Very arousing and also had some funny parts but that all makes the story more real..

Not a bad story if you can ignore the other people involved. I'm afraid I couldn't. Danny is getting screwed into bringing up someone else's child and Nancy apparently feels that the fundamental problem in her marriage is getting solved by her husband's one-time fuck-fest with her cousin. This is not going to turn out well.

Would think she will need one more child in a couple of years! Most women want at least two don't you think?

Also some internal conversations on each of your thoughts when you are together at family gathering each re-living some of the other 10 or so sessions would be good. This story still has some legs and it was certainly enjoyable.

Very good dialogue and the story was very enjoyable. Encore please!

Dittos on the More. Thamks

Should have made Elaine's point of view after the incident.

A cousin or brother knocking up the wife of a man shooting blanks is more common than most think. I know of two families where this happened. Makes for an interesting family tree.

Cheaters are cheaters, no matter what excuse they use. I hope a DNA test results in divorces for both of them. It would have not been so bad, if all four people this affected had been in on it.

They are not, as you say, cheaters. The other commenter is right. This does happen, not all the time, but not unheard of either. Sometimes within a family, sometimes between best friends. The desire is not always physical. People are funny. Some women feel unhappy unless they can give birth to a child, and their mate is not always able to fill her need. Sometimes it is done by artificial insemination, but that can be expensive. It usually works out between the couples. Nancy not really wanting to know isn't that unusual. Ignorance is sometimes bliss, really. But most people want to see others happy and if they feel they can suppress jealousy it is a good answer to a sad problem. Its a good story where the people care about each other. Nancy should be more accomodating to her husband if sex hasn't become painful, as sometimes happens for women after 40 or so. Couples need to make the attempt to satisfy each other's needs, if he is considerate enough to not be too demanding. And don't put down people's actions if you don't know the facts. And make no judgements where you have no compassion.

For all of those shooting daggers about cheaters and DNA tests...THIS IS FUCKING FICTION. I thought it was an excellent story.

A very enjoyable read! Better start work on a story about her desire for a second baby.

I found myself happy for these lovers! I like to think they, Elaine and Jake, reconnected at a later date to make yet another new family member.

With some lovely, insightful and informative comments, to boot.

(Not all anonymous are trolls and trash talkers.).

Completely agree with the Anonymous just before me.

Guess Drakon made me feel so strongly for these two special lovers (each with certain needs) that I'd like to see them get together even before the next baby making session.

This was so well written, making me feel for their situations and the tension/angst of their kinky relationships.

Reading flow was never interrupted by spelling or language aberrations.

First class storytelling.

My first Drakon66 story.

Definitely will not be the last.

A grateful reader,

Paul in Oklahoma

PS. After reflection: Might improve the story if Danny gave tacit approval, just like Nancy did.

It is cheating, by two spouses married to different people. Neither of the uninvolved parties know, even if one expressed a desire to never be told the truth. Any way you slice it, the other two, even the husband with the *theoretical* hall pass that he never checked on and does not plan to confirm, cheating on the person they gave their wedding vows to. Even if his wife really did say it was okay as long as she didn't know the truth, that doesn't mean he shouldn't feel guilty for stepping outside of his marriage. It shouldn't have made him feel 'better' about it, even if he did give in and cheat on his wife in secret.

One of the best stories Literotica has, easily five stars

This is one of the best stories on this site.

A sensational story, for the R-rated side.

NOT to change any great reviewer's opinions... but I've been in this mood... since she confesses to Jake that she's always had a crush on him... and she dresses hot - without panties... and that they start kissing - flirting - and being sensual in addition to sexual... and since he wakes up with her sucking his cock... and if it was secrecy... that it turns out that she really just wanted to start having an affair with him, instead of being pregnant, for now. We could say "Don't ruin it by making it with the plot of all the other stories on here!"

Well, it wouldn't be. The writing is too good; the characters are too defined to just be ordinary.

There have been times that a story like this comes along, and you just want to take a break from Literotica for a while, because you don't want to ruin the great feeling and memory. It would be like watching a double feature of A Few Good Men and then Encino Men.

I have been a master proofreader, and concur that it wasn't ruined by immature writers who don't know grammar, spelling, and/or punctuation.

Pozzy Thump

Really good and very hot story!