All Comments on 'Making Her a Slave'

The pig (To give him the kindest name possible) is male.

Like the format and hope you will add more to this tale

Like the format and hope you will add more to this tale

out of mental defectives. She would have to be mentally off to stay with that asshole.

I enjoyed it very much and hated to see it end. Made my pussy very wet and wanting to touch myself.

it made me want to be piggy. By the end of the story i had a puddle in my panties and my clit was swollen and needed attention. I to hated to see the story end.

This was quite good, but rimjob was on the tags and there was none in it.

Dude, I hate to be humiliated for real, but that... that was freaking hot!!! I'm sopping and want to be her!!!

o-o This was awesome! You need to keep Writing this! I love it!!!

<3

i like how he degrades her. just as she should be.

In Spades. I understand his intentions and I'm so glad I'm not a full sub, I would be walking out his door and saying bye on my way.

well, hope this continues and the story grows more complex. so far, it is all about him and his kinks getting ticked by degrading her. What about her? Why does she submit? What is her thrill?

One lame hint, so far, she is fat, not very desirable, lacks offers, experience and self-esteem - BUT as she starts to exercise regularly, this is all gonna change - soon there will no longer be any reason to submit.

Seems the plotline intro has some big holes .. fresh ideas please soonish