All Comments on 'Making Me Beg'

I love how you detailed the passion between the two women. You described them beautifully without going through the cliche statements. You've done really well. i would love to see the next installment of these two getting settled into a loving life together. Great work

I really never read many lesbian stories nut something about this one caught my eye and I really really loved it YES Please make more to go with it I would love to see more of your writting. Great great Job chefschmitty@yahoo.com

Great start. Please continue.

Yeah it was kind of sappy, some lesbos are like that. You need to throw in a little conflict to keep it interesting. The start of relationships are always hot but keeping it going is the trick especially when things start to fall apart. Hmmm kinda like real life isnt it? USA-1

Please do continue with this

I'd like to see where you can take this story. The character's are very well developed. I'd like to see more interaction between these two. Hot sex is great but there is more to a relationship. Keep writing. Please

This is a great begining. I cant wait until the next installment. You are a very talented writer.

That was the best thing i have ever read. ur a brilliant writer. if u want to send me more only by text tho. my number is 07538854845. plz only text me coz i prefer text.

That was fuckin hot. I love all the details with the hot sex. I came so hard. My pussy is soaked. Keep writting!

I like it, the first part is best. Their mental interaction and flirting. May a little to much of pussy-licking for my taste, but it's good. I like to read a part 2. Maybe Pamela takes command? :)

I'm surprised you had no comments on your story. It was well written and erotic. Although, could have really developed into a very hot story with Pamela using her charms to gain control over Maggie for both of their hot sexy pleasure.

Could have been several more hot chapters.

By all means continue on with your sequel. This is easily a story that can continue over multiple chapters and situations, as your imagination dictates. Have fun!!

Your story was well written and it made me very wet reading the hot action between these lovely ladies. Would really have enjoyed more chapters regarding how they progressed and to find out which one became the Dom. Gave the story a 5.