by gypsee
I love the submissive/reluctant position your working. Keep up the good work
good scenario. Needs just a little more situational development. It is ok to bring it along a little slower.
These plots are soo much fun.
good scenario. Needs just a little more situational development. It is ok to bring it along a little slower.
These plots are soo much fun.
I could feel it from the vivid description. I loved it and wanted it to be me. I showed the three stories to my husband and asked him to try the concept out on me. He tried but only half heartedly but I think I can get him to learn how. Great story.
The whole story line beginning with Chapter 1 has been fantastic; working his mother's complete submission into the story made it absolutely great..... more to come ?
Gypsee, I have heartily enjoyed your series. I look forward into the further degradation of the mom-slut and how she will be punished and humiliated to earn her pleasure.
...time to recruit help...this mom loves it...YOU GO GIRL!!!
Mike's knowledge of computers turned his mommie into his ecstatic fuckslut! She knows now her fantasies of being bound, spanked and fucked regularly are now the real deal and her son is her Master and she is his bitch and happy to obey is every command.!! I wish the stories were longer, I need more time ; but great and well written!
Submission desires often lay just skin deep and doesn't require much coaxing.
Looks like it could have been a good premise, but I'll never know because I don't bother reading anything that isn't at least two pages long. If this story was developed it possibly could have been four, two page chapters. Take your time, put in the work and see what you can do. You might surprise yourself. Good Luck.