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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Sweet

Very very good jumpingbill. Well written and perfect blend of nc/reluctance and beautiful young female. Do share the events of the coming (sorry pun) evening with us. Is Fred invited (hopefully) or does he arrive unannounced?

I am betting that one or more of these aspiring actresses are recently and happily married but still hungry for the fame they never achieved. This could be a great series and I'll be reading whatever you write. Thanks for your contribution.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Nice Job

I fantasized about Joey Heatherton years ago. But it was never this good. 4 stars. I'll be watching for your next story/chapter

cowbullscowbullsabout 7 years ago
4+ stars

A great story and you have a great knack for just the right level of hesitation.

XylenzXylenz9 days ago

I love to think that stories like this are true. Post more!

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