by Flaouterakh
Highly erotic and arousing. Beautifully written and am looking forward to future maybe longer instalments.
This is a well-executed "erotic couplings" type of story, but I couldn't help feeling that the story idea and characters have much more potential. There was a hint of some trauma in the male character's past that deserved to be explored further. Dialog, which is pretty much absent here, could be effective.
Beautifully written,crystal clear images.For me a good horny read.So very sensitive and very sensual.
Would like to see where you take chapter two. Maybe you could draw out that chapter a bit more.