All Comments on 'Making of a Slut'

by ladytwerk

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Sorry but...

This should definitely be in the Non-Con/Reluctance category as this is rape and not consensual sex and barely counts as BDSM.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Your writing is solid but I'm not into several elements of the story. Married with a second sexual life is a turn off. Being used like that, slapping, parade of strangers, disgust as a turn on, it's all a turn off for me. Maybe next time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
also very sorry

but this is not erotic

Bret_HarteBret_Harteabout 9 years ago
Open Marriage?

Hardly. By selecting a man other than your husband to be your "Sir" (master), you are endangerining yourself and your husband, with neither of you in control of what happens to you. If you wish to pursue this second relationship, you should divorce from your husband first, as it is very clear from your story that your master does not care one whit for you, your health, your husband, his health, nor your relationship with your husband. On the other hand. he does enjoy endangering your health, and abusing you. Not Cool.

DomSaulDomSaulabout 9 years ago
consent

No it should not she consented to be her Masters sub and she is giving him everything. This was so hot. Good girl. Anon. If you had the balls to understand you would use your real name. The true beauty in a sub is her complete submission and trust in her Dom. He stated no marks on her face so he was in protect mode and would have stopped the scene if it had gone to far. Masters and Doms care for our pets and slaves on different levels than you vanillas can even imagine.

ladytwerkladytwerkabout 9 years agoAuthor
Thank you for the feedback

Anonymous, I am sorry that this was not erotic to me. However, I do not feel you can just the extent of my relationship with my Sir. Also, I do not feel it was non consensual. While there were elements of the day that I would not have had the energy, desire, or imagination to try, I willingly chose not to use my established safe word. Also, we had a long conversation afterwards, as there were elements we were both displeased about. This has been my only gangbang with my Sir, and our relationship is growing stronger.

Bret, I appreciate your concern and feedback. However, by open marriage I am free to date(not just fuck) who I please. To take care of my social needs, and emotional needs, while maintaining our home with my husband fighting overseas. My love and devotion will not fade for my husband, I love him, and I look forward to him returning. He loves me, and wants my needs met. further, it is safer than me cheating, and we are both educated, military trained, and more importantly want our kids to grow up with both parents. We would not put ourselves in danger. Lastly, if you are near a big city I assure you that you can find a club with meet an greets, and socials, as well as events. There are many ways to get your needs met.

DomSaul, thank you, and concurring with your post.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Scary

If this was simply a fantasy, I would not have commented. But it sounds from your reply that this actually happened. I think everyone is entitled to get their kicks however they choose, no matter how damaging to them it may appear to others. No one can judge anyone else on their choices, if they are entered into freely with full awareness. What concerns me is that this was your first gangbang with your Sir, and he decided to drop you into a situation that sounds potentially dangerous, rather than easing you slowly into having multiple sex partners with trusted partners. You say there were elements that you were displeased about, but you chose not to use your safe word. I think that you might be wiser to allow yourself to use your safe word when you are not happy with a situation. That's what the safe word is for after all. But hey, if that kind of anonymous, risky and uncontrolled sex is what turns you on, that's your choice and your risk to take.

ladytwerkladytwerkabout 9 years agoAuthor
scary

Hi Anon, thank you for your concern. While there were elements that were very unpleasant and unplessurable, I will address what I tried my best (though I believe unsuccessfully) to convey in the story.

First and foremost, my Sir has built and earned my trust through His references, our experiences,our time together and His intellect. I would never put myself in a situation like this otherwise. Next, while I do not crave or want gangbangs and random sex partners, neither had been or have been expressed as a hard or soft limit. Thus far it has been my only gb. Lastly, I didn't use my safe word because I did not feel so distressed that I needed it, though I was on the verge, and Sir's enjoyment was important to me.

I appreciate your concern, and am disappointed that I did not do a better job of balancing my mindset during this with the trust factor, and that you did not find it erotic.

Kind Regards

Anonymous
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