All Comments on 'Making the Swim Team'

you dont go from vanila to taking on two college boys in one day. too unreal

Here are my two cents. While there is 'action' in the story and even change in the characters, it's your job to make the reader care about it and believe that this kind of change is likely to have happened to this kind of character. Finally, if there is no sense of any conflict, the story will probably be less than engaging.

Could not agree less with the two previous comments. From plain vanilla to hot wife happens just as easily as being seduced into extra marital relations when the sexual need and opportunity are present, even more so when you have a spouse consenting to your pleasure. As far as conflict goes; those emotions were well portrayed.