All Comments on 'Making Yasmini My Slut Ch. 02'

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So many errors.

Perhaps she will get to eat her sister's pussy.

Thanks for the good read.

There was quite a few errors, keep looking for an editor. And also keep writing mistakes or not good read. Look forward to the next chapter.

Keep it going is all I can say. Even with the errors most us know what you meant to say, or write.

Good story but wan to suggest you one thing to add Yasmini's Sister too in 3rd chap.

It'll be good & more horny if u add Sister Lesbain sex in ur story and if also get some 4some................It'll be an awesome story....

Agreed that proof reading is required...however, it was good going. Yasmini's resistance was expected when she realised what had happened. She got convinced with the situation very easily...

But would not mind the way story has progressed. Lets see what is in store in the next chapter. Waiting for the third chapter

very hott!! when is the next chapter coming out??

cant wait till next part, when wil it be ready.

awesome story can't wait to the other part!!

Awesome story ! Can't wait for the update

Makes me horny everytime <3

It was excellent but nine years to finish a story makes it only three stars

Get off you bum and finish it