All Comments on 'Man Fucked by Mannequins'

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AleclovesAlecloves12 months ago

What a great adventure. I would have loved to be watching this mmm

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Beutiful I would loved to be raped like this

heavygravityheavygravityover 11 years ago
horny. confusing POV

wow that's wildly crazy! like a horny man wrote this! you do know some people get turned on by dirty dialogue like this, don't you. mmm..

Anyway there's confusing part of which the POV suddenly sounded like turned to reader's POV (p20) ?

madox664madox664over 11 years ago

Just real a few of the stories here and get the scence in writing out the sexy sceen cuz this can be a realy hot story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Er?

WTF you dint just say "horrible dialogue" and expect not to offend. Anon number two that was NOT criticism but a really un constrcuctive reply to the story. If my tutor gave me that feedback I would call him out in it because it does not help at all.

I give it 5 stars for the rude replies by the first anons.

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