All Comments on 'Mandy and Jack'

by nikki_2021

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ONOURL8ONOURL8almost 19 years ago
Amazing as usual

This is an amazing story. As usual your work is excellent. I love the slow build up and how you give us the thoughts of the characters. Because of this I find myself able to relate to them and almost place myself in the story.

rayfromjerseyrayfromjerseyabout 18 years ago
free sex

this is good old no holds barred fucking at it's best! totally free of the usual quid pro quo involving guilt and other bullshit... good stuff, I will read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
just one thing ...

they wouldn't let it end this way. I'ts out of character. Both would want to repeat this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good story, but ending disappointing

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December 2023 Wow, time flies when you're busy. You'll be pleased to know I am still writing, just struggling to find the time. I have posted a new story for you, Outback Affairs. Its about a family in remote Australia finding love ... with each other. Keep an eye out and I h...