All Comments on 'Mandy'

excellent story, very romantic, well written

loved every second of it!

You wrote that your character was “2000 miles from home”, and then described the colder weather “back in Albuquerque”. Please, take a quick look at a roadmap next time— the only way that it would be a 2,000 mile trip if you went by way of the Canadian border!

From Albuquerque, you can jump on I-40 westbound and be in LA in just under 12 hours if you drive straight through— it’s about 760 miles.

Delightful premise.

Well written.

Not exagerated. No 44DD's. No 8" cock.

Smoothly written. Nice progression.

Five stars.

(LOSING, not winning, has one "O".)