All Comments on 'Manny Ch. 02'

by AudreyHepburn

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Hot sex and great style too!

I have read each of AudreyHepburn's stories, and think she is one of the best writers on this site that I have come across -- and I think there are many fine writers represented here. What sets her work apart is the combination of hot sex and a fine literary style. She takes the time to develop her characters and place them in a specific setting before having them fuck each other's brains out. In my opinion that makes for the best erotic writing, and I applaud Ms. Hepburn's talent. More, please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Good Characterization

It's not just about sex with this author! She creates wonderful and developed characters and circumstances/situations that lead to very passionate sex scenes. Manny and Jessica are on fire in this chapter and let's hope that the rest of their love story, no matter which direction it takes, is good enough to read. Well done, Audrey!

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