All Comments on 'Marie Ch. 01'

Nice build up and sense of reticence on the wife's part. Very hot, thanks for sharing. Luke

I like it. It was very entertaining. Love the the shy wife growing in her sexuality. Great story. Was well written and not boring at all. Keep up the good work.

Keep going, I like the story. The plot is a little used but I like the love the characters share, but like so many of these types of stories what starts as a sharing of a pleasure moment will become. The wife will fall in love with younger, or bigger cock and the husband will end up a wimp at home waiting for the slut to return from her date. I am for the sharing but it should be both ways. Does Marie allow hubby to take a lover as she will be doing the play? Because I can tell she is going to get her ass shagged off by that young stud. Will she play the same part as the husband has in setting up her pleasure? Do Ed & Marie already have a ending lived out?

It really turned me on that the young guy got his cock in to the older woman. I'm just thinking about two weeks of rehearsals. By the time the show opens, she will probably be pregnant,and her pussy will be stretched out to fit the co-star's cock nicely. After the stud finishes with her she won't be able to feel her husbands cock when he fucks her unless he takes her up the ass. The only negative thing about the whole affair is that she will be accustomed to big cock and will probably be looking for another stud to fill her up again. Thanks for the good story..........Rich

but extremely well done. I encourage the writer to continue writing even I do not read the rest. By the way, I gave the story five stars. I just do not like cuckold stories

even if these aren't my favorite type of stories, the writting was good. The only thing is at the end, it is always another person that sexually wakes up the wife and not her husband. I hope the author doesn't leave the idea that the husband wants a better sex life with his wife, NOT BECOMING A JACKING-OFF CUCKOLD. I want to read of how his wife becomes a better lover for her hubby too.

...if not terribly original. But the horny devil is in your inspired details. You raised a lump in these pants, and made me look forward to sequels. However, next time I won't read the other "reviews", as you seem to have attracted all those (or are they really just the same one masquerading as many under different names?) idiotic sickos who can't help reading this type of material, jerking off to it, then atoning for their sins by spewing their sad repetitive "wimp" vitriol across the comment page. Pieater

Hope there's a part two!

I keep coming back to it and it just keeps getting better. Can't wait till the next chapters!

BEST STORY I'VE READ IN LONG TIME.THE NEXT CHAPTER WONT BE TOO LONG IN COMMING I HOPE.

Can't wait for part two. Also a word to the authors: please don't be bothered by the jerks who have some fetish need to complain about these types of stories. I can't imagine why they spend so much time reading them.

Waiting for more

Very well written and erotic.

This is a superbly written story. Very erotic and enjoyable.

This is my favorite story series at the moment on this site. However, waiting 6 weeks between chapters is quite painful so to speak. In the future, what I would do is write the whole story and save as a word document on your computer. Once you have all chapters completed, post a chapter of it every day or two.

The problem with waiting 6 weeks between chapters is that people can lose interest in the series. That would be a shame with a series that is coming along as good as this one is.

what a brilliant story. reading this was like watching the

rehearsals taking place. i could see the young man and Marie

acting out this part in the play.

Absolutely fantastic, keep it up

Excellent building of tension!

great story - well written.

What a story.. I now have to finish the rest of the chapters and if they are anthing like this...... I might have to get some KY stock...

Just because DWornock voted 1.

briliant first story. marie ch 1

reading this had my cock so hard from start to finish .

a real out standing story. the writing of it was nothing but pure joy. to read. i can't wait to read the next part of this very exciting erotic story. you are a fabulous writing

Such a hot story. So well written and so realistic. Yes this could have happened to me and my wife... Wow, Can't wait to read the rest of the charters.... This is extremely good stuff. I would say this is truly on the professional level....So well done Guys Congratulations.

This is a very erotic fantasy. Please keep up the sexy writing.

This story is one of my most FAVORITES. STILL wish the authors would write more about what has happened since. Is this a true story? I think so.... Thanks so much for sharing.

LuckyMM

Well, here it is about a year later, re-reading the story again, and it continues to still get my "engine" running. Same comments as before... I really wish the authors would write more. This was so so HOT. A year ago I did write to the authors asking if this was a true story. They (he) wrote back that it was not a true story, something they co-wrote for the fun of it.

Well they did such a good job that I want to encourage them again to write more if they are so inclined. Thanks authors for writing what you did. I loved it. LuckyMM

I agree with the previous comment. This is one of my favourite stories and I keep coming back to it again and again. I really wish they would finish it. Please write more!

Congratulations on writing an erotic classic!

ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca

Very erotic story!

Incredibly hot story! I can see this happening just that way to a couple in this situation. If the young man hadn't been so nice, or if the wife had been more hesitant, the story would not have progressed as it did. But she trusted her husband to understand, and her hubby was excited enough to let her explore her limits. Everyone ended up with a fulfilling experience. Including us readers!

Hubby is clueless. Just from reading the words I knew when he fingered her and when his cock entered her. He was there live and in person... He witnessed her physical reactions that he described to us. Yet he had no idea what was happening in front of him?

Now that he's opened the door for her to have sex with other men I hope she's as loving as he thinks she is. Obviously she'll be able to get away with anything she wants and he'll be none the wiser even if he catches her in the act.

Pam my high-school sweetheart was one of the main actress in our senior year pkay. I was on the stage crew. In the play her partner was an arrogant big feeling better than most kind of guy Darren Aires. We had practice for over a month. The last week of practice before the big weekend when there would be 2 shows during practice when they were to kiss a fake kiss as all were instructed to do. From where I was at the controls could see that Darren gave Pam a real kiss.she didn't resist. The crowd all hoope and yelled and whistled. I felt about an inch tall. I was pissed. Darren gave me a smirk and I gave him a finger. One of the teachers Mr Carter seen me and said we needed to go to the office. I asked why ? He said it was inappropriate what I done. So I said I guess what Darren did was really great? No answer just let's go.I thought F___ this play. I stood but didn't move Mr Carter said move it. I just stood. I knew he was a hot head. Again move he said. Again I just stood. That got him where I wanted him. He shoved meand I faked a trip and fell into the controls shoving all the switches I could trying to get up I was pushing more switches. This caused the circut to overload and a lot of damage I ran grabbed a fire extinguisher and put out the fire that started. Mr Carter stood there like a black of wood. Another teacher Mrs Smith asked him what the world is wrong with you Mr Carter was you going to let the school burn. Pam was standing there looking at me. Darren was gone wow he sure was a brave boy. MRS Smith said loudly everyone settle down we are safe thanks to Sam Bledsoe leading me out on the stage. I was acting like I was embarrassed. Pam came to me and hugged me. I let her but I wasn't hugging her. Later after everything was back to normal except the damage to the controls Pam was waiting for me. She asked will you take me home Sam I would like to talk. What about are you breaking up with me? No I don't want to. I don't know what Darren was trying to do. I said I know what he was trying to do. He's trying to steel you away from me. Well he's not going to and I've already told the director about what Darren did and he said won't happen again. I said sure Pam I would love to take you home maby we can share a slice of pie on the way? Sure that would be great. We are married with 3 children.

These sexual acts on stage in front of the public would land you in jail here in the States. But damn, That was a smoking hot chapter 1!