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by vqfarrold

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Utterly rivetting

This is a very fine piece of writing indeed, well managed and developed. The focus is very fine, the details intricate. There is a magnetic quality to the eroticism in this story that is very arousing. The only slight impediment was a few typos and misspellings that were irritating especially when the focus is so concentrated. A really enjoyable story. Thank you! Collared_dirtygirl.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wow

More please! I want to know what Dave has in mind for Marion and Paul, if anything.

vqfarroldvqfarroldover 12 years agoAuthor
Re 'Wow'

There is a sequel - 'Tell me' - but I'm afraid it's not the scenario you are looking for.

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I write for my own pleasure and post my writing here in the hope that others may find some enjoyment in it too (thanks, Literotica, for providing that opportunity). Some of it springs from my fantasies, some from experience, some from suggestions of others. I try to be origi...