All Comments on 'Mark & Demi Join Intimate Club'

Neither character strikes me as being terribly reluctant.

In 40, or so, years as a frequent swinger, I have never had the pleasure of being affiliated with such a club. Maybe one exists, who knows?

But, whether it does, or not, this tale was more than a fun read and a very hot stroke story.

Keep up good work.

I enjoyed this story. Keep hoping I'll find a club like this some day. My biggest issue was the spelling. You should make use of the services of an editor here. They did slow down the pace of the story by my having to reread the sentence to figure out what some words really were, like cough instead of couch.

I have experience as a technical writer/editor and I always have someone else review my stuff before I do anything more with it. I don't have anything published here yet.

I do plan to read more of your work. Thank you for a really fun story.

Thank you for your kind words! I'm aware of the flaws in my grammar. Being a non-native writer in English, I do get anoyed myself sometimes for not using the right spelling all the time. I'll do a re-edit of this story shortly, for it still does contain too many mistakes indeed.

TK U MWB AMS NETH

The premise of this story is a good one. Not real excited about A2M cleanup though, even if the girls were properly cleaned before they were brought out onto the stage. I do hope there is a follow-on story