All Comments on 'Mark, Mom and Mindy'

by carl_a

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tobytimtobytimover 12 years ago
Great writing

This is so hot & good,,,, where is the rest of the story,,,,

Mom has to come into the picture & so on

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
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Needs to be longer. Too short.

GizmorGizmorover 12 years ago
MMM

Great start to a good story. Hope more is cumming soon!Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
now

What would be sweet is that the son comes on to the mother thinking that it was her that he fucked last night she is confused but he still trys to fuck her again.--BG

floaturboatfloaturboatover 12 years ago
NIce!

Pleasantly surprising story. I hope you write more chapters that delve into the past and goes forward for more hot sex. Thanks for you effort. 5*

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 12 years ago
Sweet but short

So; he wants to fuck his mom or is he already fucking her?

Sis has her dibs on him now, and she has to find a way to let him know that it was her he fucked instead of mom.

I would like to read more of the three of them,and how their sex lives continue to become even hotter.

Thanks for the good read.

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationover 12 years ago

Hmmm. A little bit about Mark and Mom, but a lot more about Minday and Mark. I can't help but wonder who puts the moves on Mom first -Mark or Mindy. Hope we find out very soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

I wish I could have... both sisters and my mom

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a9 months ago

As one who has no problem with mutually consensual incest in real life, the only problem I have with this chapter is that Mark does not know the person who he thinks he is making love to is actually his sister, who is having sex. The preceding does not meet the criteria for mutually consensual incest. Additionally, I like character development, both in depth and breadth. Finally, I like stories where the plot/subplots are logically developed and believable. Based on my opening comment, I rated this chapter 4 stars.

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