All Comments on 'Marking Time'

by RichDinMD

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widespreadinterestswidespreadinterestsover 19 years ago
Terrific story!

Well written and sexually charged. The naive young man in the big city theme plays well, and the young man is very believable. Plus it made me hot. Can't ask for better than that.

DodgeES1998DodgeES1998over 11 years ago
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While this was sometimes engrossing, and we like the NO STUFF build up, will you continue, OR is this THE END? we wonder. It COULD, possibly, become fascinating.

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