All Comments on 'Marni's black submission'

Quite predictable with a nice twist at the end but I liked it. Well written as usual.

More character development on Luke and Anna would have been nice.

Beautiful story about the conversion of a white bitch into a submissive wife to a dominant black amazon female and her black stud friend. Story can be expanded to include bristol palin and her mom introduced to black fucking and total submission for their racial politics towards blacks.

The teist came to soon, to abruptly and was not believable. Anna should have ended up being dominated too.

Maybe you should write alternative ending

The rape of Anna by her uncle bit at the ending was completere unneccesary especially because of her sudden acceptance of being taken by Luke. Absolute ridiculous and unbelievable. Other than that, the story was pretty good.